7 time SB Champ- Unlikely Concept

No.

Ik her Green inspires but I thought her purple said confidence

Alright…
First off, gifs are very clunky so I don’t suggest using them unless you put them in hide details. (Though that may be just me)

I told you last time there should be a space after every comma.
All examples of this:

This time you put a space in the beginning and end. The space should only be in the end. Example “Let’s eat, grandma”.

Not sure, but I think there is supposed to be a space before and after the hyphe. Like this:
“Tom Brady - Unlikely Concept”. There are a lot of these instances, but i am sure you can find them.


Overall, the concept seemed very blocky. I suggest you fix all of these errors.

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:thinking:
It has always been inspiration.

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Sorry,it’s a habit :grimacing:

Isn’t increasing confidence also a buff tho? Not in that skill set but in general?

Lol.

Welp, you can try to improve… Keep working on it. Next time, check for these errors before you post.

Confience buff doesn´t exists.

I did it again, didn’t I?

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I might change it to inspiring allies for X seconds. On second

Yup.

There ya go

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Do you have any concept feedback @Rinoxer0nte?

Why is that replied to me? :confused:

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It might have been the way I did it,my apologies

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I really suggest you fix all of those errors.

These gifs are unnecessary.

Yeah I’ll get rid of them

I still suggest renaming the topic to:

And fixing all of the commas/hyphens

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Now to be rude ,but can u read it?

You… Didn’t fix the grammar errors.

Yes, but it is a little… rough on the eyes

Ok,ill fix the comma errors mostly

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