Mega fredzilla likely HERO concept

[Mr_Dumbo_LXIII]

Name-Fred
stars,
position front
role,tank
description at day he,s the school mascot at night he,s fred-zilla burning enemies with his fire breath.

Quote-ooh I’ll go my name is fred and its been 30 day since my last HOLY MOTHER OF MEGAZON!

Entrance- Fred comes through turning the sign then puts on his hood and makes a crouch pose.

victory-Fred bursts out fire and puts of his hood.

defeat- Fred’s suit burns up and fades away and so does he.

basic attack.Fred shoots out fireballs to the closest enemies.

white skill
normal damage
harnessing the power of the sun.
Fred burst out flames which deals x stack of fear and anger to any enemy it has contact with.

green skill
crunchy style, bring the heat,WTMP,
Fred throws a noodle burger at the weakest ally giving them x health

blue skill
way too dramatic.
the first time fred reaches 0HP he’ll pretend to do a slow motion K.O then after 6 seconds comes back and becomes invincible for 4 seconds.

purple skill
its called recycling
Everytime fred gets disabled the time it takes is halved
it might not work with enemies above x level.

red skill
blowing hard
everytime fred uses harnessing the power of the sun it give double the damage to weakest enemies
might not work on enemies above x level.
additional stats

+x basic damage
+x skill power
+x damage from harnessing the power of the sun.

friendships
fred,baymax
disk.burning marshmallow, everytime fred uses crunchy style bring the heat WTMP the amount of hp given to allies is x bigger.

fred,mike wasolwski
triclops, way too dramatic now revives a previously K.O,d ally giving them x hp for x seconds.

[Lucky-Oswald]

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

white skill
harnessing the power of the sun.
Fred burst out flames which deal x damage to any enemy it has contact with.

What type of damage?

(Fantastic, Normal or True?)

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

dealing them x health

You mean giving?

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

way too dramatic,
the first time fred reaches 0HP he’ll pretend to do a slow motion K.O then after 6 seconds comes back and becomes invincible for 4 seconds.

It would be 1 HP.

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

Everytime fred gets disabled the time it takes is halved

A bit op but ok.

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

everytime fred uses harnessing the power of the sun at the end he bounces and creates a shockwave that gives double the damage to weakest enemies

Red Skills don’t have animations, and missing stat boosters.

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

friendships
fred,baymax
disk.burning marshmallow, everytime fred uses crunchy style bring the heat WTMP the amount of hp given to allies is 15% bigger.

fred,mike wasolwski
triclops, way too dramatic now revives K.O,d allies giving them x hp.

Missing stat boosters and what do they do per star? Also, the “giving them X HP” the variable isn’t needed.

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I also find this concept is a bit messy and does need work with the formatting.

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[Myeong]

Where’s his basic attack, role, and position?

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

white skill
harnessing the power of the sun.
Fred burst out flames which deal x damage to any enemy it has contact with.

What type of damage is this (Normal, Fantastic, TRUE)?

Which enemies does Fred hit with this?

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

green skill
crunchy style, bring the heat,WTMP,
Fred throws a noodle burger at the weakest ally dealing them x health

Er… where is this from? Because I don’t remember this being in the BH6 movie. Is it from the cartoon series?

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

blue skill
way too dramatic,
the first time fred reaches 0HP he’ll pretend to do a slow motion K.O then after 6 seconds comes back and becomes invincible for 4 seconds.

Does Fred heal himself with this? Otherwise, he’ll be dead again immediately once the invincibility wears off.

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

purple skill
its called recycling
Everytime fred gets disabled the time it takes is halved
it might not work with enemies above x level.

… What does this skill have to do with Fred’s “recycling”?

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

red skill
blowing hard
everytime fred uses harnessing the power of the sun at the end he bounces and creates a shockwave that gives double the damage to weakest enemies
might not work on enemies above x level.

You… may want to think of a different name for this skill.

Also, Red skills are passive effects, so this doesn’t really work.

You’re also missing stat boosts from the Red Skill.

@Mr_Dumbo_LXIII

fred,baymax
disk.burning marshmallow, everytime fred uses crunchy style bring the heat WTMP the amount of hp given to allies is 15% bigger.

fred,mike wasolwski
triclops, way too dramatic now revives K.O,d allies giving them x hp.

You’re missing star upgrades for these disks.

Also, Fred’s Mike disk looks way too overpowered if it doesn’t have a limit on how many times it can revive allies.

There’s also a lot of formatting issues.

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[PepsiFan25]

@Lucky-Oswald already told that

[Myeong]

Oswald and I wrote our comments around the same time, so overlap is unsurprising.

Also, we both mentioned things that the other person didn’t say, so it’s not as if our comments are identical.

[MixTs]

Where r his chips?

[LetsGetDangerousBro]

Welcome to the forums!

1. Please don’t revive dead topics next time
2. Fred isn’t in the game yet, so be patient