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[Lilpotato6930]

Delete this topic pls.

[Imagineer_V]

I have feedback @Lilpotato6930 In general, it is ok and the concept is still confusing.

her strength of power that can tricked

this phrase does not make sense

Support

seems more of a damage than support hero

Esmeralda Throws a rock/swing and hit the enemies with the candelabra stick Dealing Y Damage.

seems like 2 different attacks in one. it does not make that much sense.

Entrance: She walks in the battle field lifting her dress and twirl as she stop (as she’s in 2 pre waves she walks normally)

they always do the same entrance for each wave

Esmeralda pulls out a metal guard Hat while she’s the farthest as she throws through the enemies against then hit them around many times until it’s stunned for 4 seconds.

the throw should happen only once and stun for a little bit longer. some of the phrasing makes no sense. also, you need the type of damage the skill deals.

During each pre wave, esmeralda summons her pet goat djali when begin the battle,when djali is in the battle he grants allies 390 skill power as he rushes into the enemies hit with his head dealing Y Damages.

the phrasing does not make much sense. also, the specific numbers should be general variables.

When Esmeralda’s Health are almost below she pulls out a napkin sobs softly after seconds she sneezes and disappears with pink smoke and appears again behind the enemies as hitting them with the candelabra stick dealing 6%

below what HP? the % and phrasing also does not make sense

PURPLE: “Show Them The Mercy”
Esmeralda gains her X Skill Power when recieving Energy from an ally armed as her green skill gets in more speed ahead.

phrasing is strange and does not make sense.

RED: “Help The Outcast”
Every time esmeralda deals in y damage the enemy hit is studied for 10 seconds. And “Puffed Sneeze” will also decrease all enemies’ basic damage by X% for X seconds

this seems random and does not make sense. this is the only skill that makes her a support.

Esmeralda has 9% chance to metal hat attacks

this makes no sense and never happens in the game. the skills always happen, but effects have a chance to fail sometimes.

If you ever need help improving or making a concept, feel free to PM me and I can help. From what I remember about the original, this is a lot better. Keep trying and you will improve.

[Lilpotato6930]

Sorry if I’m confusing you but I’m always try my best like I’m having trouble about the concepts but maybe I’ll just fix the error and it will be better is that okay?

[Imagineer_V]

I did not mean to come off as harsh. I get it! I bet this concept was tough! Yeah, that would be totally fine. If you ever need help with a concept in the future, do not hesitate to ask me. I love helping people.

[Lilpotato6930]

Thanks for your respect I appreciate I know in my Anna Character concept talking about the skills of what it looks like might be interesting

[Imagineer_V]

I love Anna! She is one of my favorite characters. Since she is, I would love to help out. I can set up a PM, if you want.

[Lilpotato6930]

I love Anna too and it will be great as well