Grammatical Error Found

[StaleAstorPie]

Mod upgrades

[Myeong]

… What’s the grammatical error here?

[CodeMore6]

Oh, I see it.

“Increases reality equal to a percent of thier max HP.”

[StaleAstorPie]

Reality has a their speltbwrong

[CodeMore6]

I already pointed it out, but ok I guess?

[CodeMore6]

@Musketeer-Endgame

So here’s another typo. no one wants to lose 6 million armor

[Filadae_Djaq]

@CodeMore6

So here’s another typo. no one wants to lose 6 million armor

It’s the enemies who lose armor, not Helga… not really a typo

[Musketeer-Endgame]

@CodeMore6

So here’s another typo. no one wants to lose 6 million armor

Snared enemies lose armor

Just shortened wording.

[CodeMore6]

Oh great.

I forgot about that

maybe they should change the summary then

[Pipsqueak]

Shank

[Pipsqueak]

There’s a double space here

[Pipsqueak]

double space ^

hurdling towards someone would be a strange choice of running technique over open ground I think it’s probably supposed to be hurtles

unphased should also be unfazed

[Pipsqueak]

“drag” should be “drags”
“Sully” should be “Sulley”

[Pipsqueak]

this should be either “continue their” or “continues its”

[Pipsqueak]

same here:

[Myeong]

I think the way it’s currently written could technically still work since “Team One” is a singular team, but it’s composed of multiple people.

Although I do agree that “continues its” would be more preferable.

[Pipsqueak]

with the second one, if “the team scrambles” is singular and right then it should be “its” feet, not their

[Myeong]

I don’t disagree, but the thing is that even though its only one team, it’s not as if there’s only one pair of feet for them to “scramble to”. There’s multiple members of the team that need to get back on their feet, so idk which is the more proper grammar to use here.

[Scarce]

Flik is spelled wrong.

[CodeMore6]

the correct spelling was flicked out of existence