Lord Hater and Commander Peepers

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"I have mangled the minds of millions, I have tempted forth torrential tides of tears, I have reduced the richest of republics to revel and ruin! Because I…am the greatest in all the galaxy! "

Lord Hater and Commander Peepers are here to take over the battlefield with their strategic debuffing capabilities.

Series: Wander over Yonder
Midline Control Heroes - Yellow Team
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White skill - Planetary Conqueror
(Passive): Lord Hater and Commander Peepers both basic attack simultaneously. Lord Hater’s hand blasts deal fantastic damage, while Commander Peepers’ laser gun deals normal damage.
At the start of battle, if the enemy with the highest skill power has more armor than reality, Lord Hater will start as the leader of the duo. Otherwise, Commander Peepers will start as the leader.

(Active): If Lord Hater is the leader, Scare all enemies for 7 seconds (stunning those already scared for 7 seconds) and blast a large energy wave through all enemies to deal X fantastic damage, then swap Commander Peepers in as leader.
If Commander Peepers is the leader, Study all enemies for 7 seconds (stunning those already studied for 7 seconds), and gun down the enemy team to deal X normal damage, then swap Lord Hater in as leader.

Green skill - Number One Super Star
If Lord Hater is the leader, he throws his boombox on the field and plays his torture megamix for 9 seconds, scaring and slowing all enemies’ attack and movement speed by 30%, and dealing X fantastic damage over the duration.

If Commander Peepers is the leader, Peepers scans the entire field, studying all enemies for 9 seconds, then blasts the enemy with the most energy, dealing X normal damage and removing 300 energy and X basic damage from them for 12 seconds.

The slows from the boombox and the energy removal from the laser blast are less effective on enemies over level X.

Blue skill - Hate’s Great, Best Villain
While Lord Hater is leading, every other basic attack from Lord Hater will deal X more damage and will scare or silence the target for 4 seconds. Both debuffs have an equal chance to occur.

While Commander Peepers is leading, every other basic attack from Commander Peepers will deal X more damage and will study or stun the target for 4 seconds. Both debuffs have an equal chance to occur.

All debuffs have a chance to fail against enemies above level X.

Purple skill - Awesomest Evil Doers
Team members have +70 crit chance against any studied or scared enemies. Enemies that are scared and studied take 80% more damage from critical hits.

These increases are less effective if the studied or scared enemy is above level X.

Red skill - Greatest in the Galaxy
When Lord Hater and Commander Peepers are damaged by a scared or studied enemy, damage that enemy for X damage. This does 35% more damage against enemies that are both scared and studied.
This does fantastic damage if Lord Hater is leading, and normal damage if Commander Peepers is leading.

While enemies are scared, they’re also cursed (and vice versa), and while enemies are studied, they’re also sapped (and vice versa).

The debuffs have a chance to fail if the ally who inflicted them is above level X.

+X reality
+X crit damage
+X bonus damage to Hate’s Great, Best Villain

Friendship Discs:

Jack Skellington - Scary Christmas
“Heal on crit, evade scared enemies”

Lord Hater’s disgust for the friendly nature of Christmas time inspires Jack to throw a frightening Christmas for Hater, instead.

Effects:
Every time an ally lands a critical hit, Lord Hater and Commander Peepers heal for X HP
Enemies lose X reality while scared
Lord Hater and Commander Peepers have +(20*star level) evasion against scared enemies
Allies heal for (4%*star level) the amount that Hater and Peepers heal from this disc

Pleakley - Study Buddies
“Debilitate enemies with debuffs”

Pleakley and Peepers decide to study the natural fauna, but while Pleakley has intentions of protecting the wildlife, Peepers has more sinister intent by finding their every weakness for eventual domination.

Effects:
-X basic damage on enemies with at least 2 different debuffs
-X armor on enemies with at least 4 different debuffs
Studied enemies have -(3*star level) levels on their White and Blue skills

Animations:
Entrance - LH and Peepers slide down from the tongue on their skull ship
Loss - LH runs off in a tantrum, while Peepers is left stomping angrily
Victory - LH plays a riff on his guitar, while Peepers is hopping and cheering for him
Basic attack - Lord Hater shoots out a green blast of energy from his hand, Commander Peepers shoots out a powerful blast of energy from his laser gun

This would be in Hero Concepts. You’re missing Basic Attack, Victory, Defeat, a picture, Entrance, Quote, and Description.

Missing variables.

Missing variables and how long is the scare?

How long?

Missing variables.

Stat boosters?

You are also missing friendships. This guide should help.

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First of all, this should go in the “Creative Corner - Hero Concepts” section.

Second of all, who are these characters? What are they from?

And third, the concept itself is pretty unique, but there’s a couple of things I want to say about it.

How long do the Scare, stun, and study last for?

Attack or movement speed? Or both? And by how much?

How much of a chance? And you should probably add a “This has a chance to fail against enemies above level X.” to this skill, separate from the already existing chance. (Also, this seems a bit OP, given how that is potentially 4 different debuffs they can apply to an enemy at one time.)

This seems a bit OP. How much of a percentage of the enemy’s HP do they deal? Also, you forgot the bonus stats they gain with this skill.

And finally, you forgot to add friendship campaigns/disks.

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Thanks for the feedback, haven’t really used these forums much so I’m glad was corrected on where to post

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Probably a lot of edits for something so silly and probably won’t gain much attention, but I’m a perfectionist lol

Lord hater is the main in wonder over yander while peepers is the secondry villian in the same tv show and borh are disney charthers

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