Lou short film character hero concept

[Mad_Bambi_LXIII]

This is my first hero concept and I’m new to the forums. Lou:

Role: Damage
Position: Front
Trials Team: Red

Basic Attack: Throws items at enemies.

Entrance: Falls to the ground and forms himself

Victory: Smiles and brings the sweater sleeves up happily

Defeat: Falls to pieces

Skills

Red Skill: Changing shape
Lou looks through a lost and found box and gets an extra item to use in his shape to damage enemies.

Green Skill: Lunch box healing
Once Lou reaches Y% HP, he uses a lunch box to bring his HP up a little.

Blue Skill: Tetherball hit
Once Lou’s HP is half, he uses a tetherball to hit nearby enemies.

Purple Skill: Shapeshifting finish
Once an enemy’s HP is very low, Lou takes the final K.O.

White Skill: Lost and found box shield
When an enemy is about to attack Lou, he will sometimes hide in the box to defy some damage

    Friendships:

WALL-E!

WALL-E
“Lost and Found Box Shield” gives X more shield.
Allies: EVE, Hiro, Baymax

Nobody gets left behind

Stitch
Lunch box healing maxes out all allies HP.
Allies: Baymax, WALL-E, EVE

NOTE: Sorry if I got the allies all wrong, I’m new here.

[XxDarkNightxX]

Welcome to the forums!

So, I can help you.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

Red Skill: Changing shape
Lou looks through a lost and found box and gets an extra item to use in his shape to damage enemies.

Green Skill: Lunch box healing
Once Lou reaches Y% HP, he uses a lunch box to bring his HP up a little.

Blue Skill: Tetherball hit
Once Lou’s HP is half, he uses a tetherball to hit nearby enemies.

Purple Skill: Shapeshifting finish
Once an enemy’s HP is very low, Lou takes the final K.O.

White Skill: Lost and found box shield
When an enemy is about to attack Lou, he will sometimes hide in the box to defy some damage

Switch to top white skill, then below red skill.

And you are missing Friendship disk effects.

You forgot to put it in the picture.

You should look at @Imagineer_V’s concept making guide to learn how to make a proper concept: A Guide to Making Character Concepts

[Lucky-Oswald]

First off, all your damage skills are missing what type of damages. (Normal, Fantastic, and True)

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@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

Red Skill: Changing shape
Lou looks through a lost and found box and gets an extra item to use in his shape to damage enemies.

You’re missing stat boosters and variables. And, Red Skills don’t have animations.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

Y% HP

This is suppose to be a number like 20% for example.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

bring his HP up a little.

Variable.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

tetherball to hit nearby enemies.

Variables.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

Lou takes the final K.O.

How? And, Purple Skills don’t have animations if it is one.

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

X more shield.

???

@Mad_Bambi_LXIII

Lunch box healing maxes out all allies HP

What does the disk do per star?

Both friendship disks are missing stat boosters.

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I’ll excused the no picture since you’re not able to yet.

Imagineer’s concept guide was already posted but I’ll post it again here. A Guide to Making Character Concepts