I choose the abilities that the martian can have I hope you like
Um… is this supposed to be a concept? First of all, it’s in the wrong category for that. Second… there’s not really much here.
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Stars 1
They enter with the pizza truck planet
When they win they jump for joy
When they lose a claw take it out
Position back
Ability in white THE CLAW
They call a claw anthey drop crash in the enemies they lose life little by little
Abitity in green WE ARE THANFULL
they revive the first hero that lose but they cant revive their selfs
Ability in blue WE ARE IN PIZZA PLANET
They repart pizza for the other heroes
Ability in purple WEHAVE MORE CLAWS
They use three claws instead of one in the ability THE CLAW
Ability in red WE HAVE CLAWS
All the time they use THE CLAW they get 10% of life
this is because I was creating
You are missing tons of things. I recommend you read this whole guide: A Guide For Making Characters Concepts
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Concepts are much better when they are complete from the start. Also, taking credit for someone else’s ideas is kind of wrong, which is what it sounds like you were going to do.
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Thanks for that I will check😀
Sorry but, when did they took credit from someone else?
They did not, but it was implied that was going to happen with the first post.
Oh wait… never mind.
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It’s fine, she said 'never mind’. You joined 20 minutes ago so I don’t think you need to be going around critiquing everyone.
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Ok then who are you actually. Also I do not think you have to go around making assumptions and causing issues and drama where they do not exist.
This is the other concept I do