Me! (please give me good feeedback)

Creative Corner Hero Concepts
#1

So before i get rude commets just read it

Team trial=blue
Stars= :star: :star:
Mastry=control
Skills

  • white= This girl can play! I start to kick around a soccer ball and start stunning people :star:

  • green=how about,no I go around starting to boss the enimes aroud couseing them to be annoyed :fist:

  • blue= so not the drama I heal myshelf for me to have full health for about 5 seconds

  • purple you go girl. I go aroud starting to cheer for every one

RED SKILL COMEING SOON !!

friend ships
*kim possible
*jasmine

out of 5 stars how would u rate this[

  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
  • so good
  • so bad

0 voters

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#3

Where is the basic attack, victory, and defeat?

“Enemies” not people…
Does this deal damage? How long is the stun?

Umm… what does this do?

One of Kim Possible’s skill names… despite ones like “On The Roll,” “Grand Slam,” and “On The Groove” been repeated twice in a hero’s skills

Maybe no, how about just “X HP”

What does this do?

You should have made it before releasing your concept

What does the discs do?

And this is just feedback to help you improve. Maybe check out A Guide to Making Character Concepts to help you make better concepts.

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#4

I was just about to give them the link to this! Great minds think alike.

@Admiral_Oswald_LXIX let me know if you need more help with a concept. I actually made the concept guide and it has helped a lot of people :slight_smile:

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#5

You are missing the animations

How many seconds?

really I dont understand this skill, how much is the cooldown

enemies*

causing*

cooldown?

This makes what?

You have to make the frienships and the red skill after you post it

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#6

You do not have to, but you should. Concepts should always be complete, but they do not have to.

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#7

sorry i didn´t know :sweat_smile:

it help me a lot

#8

u thank you for advice but u guys are cold like try to treat people the way u want to be treated because my life is more :face_with_symbols_over_mouth: than u think

#9

here is the diffet and victory

win i put my fists in the air
lose i stomp my foot down in a anoyed way

#10

also did any one not see the topic sign please give me good feedback

#11

Bell
Disk
Allies
Advantage

#15

We gave you good feedback and we are being nice to you. You cannot force people to give you feedback. Keep being creative and improving :slight_smile:

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#16

toda esta guia

#17

we know that in the title says “give me good feedback” but if you want good feedback do a good concept, I know this sounds a little rude but all the feedback we give to you is to help you make better concepts in the future, also you speak other language and translate it to english? How much time do you take to do this concept?

#19

excuse*

speak*

french*
and for prevent starting a discussion I will better get out of here

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