Skylar (Girl Vs Monster concept)

[Darkshadow7]

Description: A fifth generation monster hunter who’s never been afraid before.
Trial Team: Red
Type: Support
Star:
Entrance: Adjusted her blaster for battle.
Victory: Jumps happily.
Defeat: Starts to be frightened.
Quote: “Just don’t let it scare you.”

Skills

Basic- Uses blaster to her enemies.

White- Fearless: Increased both attack and defense of herself and her allies.

Green- Had me @ Hello: Depletes speed of enemy.

Blue- Nothing Gonna Stop Us Now: Temporal invincibility for 30 secs.

Purple- Containment: Traps her enemies which could be a rare instant KO although could fail.

Red- I am not afraid: Regenerates health for 10 seconds.

Friends
Skylar + Jack Skellington
Campaign: A frightful Halloween.
Plot: Jack is struggling with new ideas for this year’s Halloween so Skylar decides to help him out.
Disk: Scared Silly
Disk Memory: Increases her “Fearless” skill.
Allies: Maleficent, Goliath, Sally, Ursula

Skylar + Sully
Campaign: Monster is Loose
Plot: Randall has returned, and causing more fear instead of laughs. It’s up to Skylar & Sully to stop him.
Disk: Laughter we’re After
Disk memory: Increased the chance to contain your enemy for instant KO.
Allies: Mike, Darkwing Duck, Mickey, Pooh

[Jungalians_KL]

Couple of things:

White: Allies speed are increase by what? HP healed should include a variable.

Green: What does “deplete” mean, and once again, what is their speed reduced to?

Purple: Sounds way too OP for a purple skill, and you could have said: The instant KO has a chance to fail if enemies are above level X.

Red: Once again, needs a variable.

For the Friend Campaigns:

Should include the disk variables and star level and disk levels.

They are also usually 3 allies in a campaign, not 4.

If you want to make a good concept, read this:

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[TheCannonCart]

@Jungalians_KL

Sounds way too OP for a purple skill, and you could have said: The instant KO has a chance to fail if enemies are above level X.

Not really, the chance just needs to be very low
But because all purple skills are passive effects, they need to change the skill

@Jungalians_KL

Once again, needs a variable.

Red skill also needs to be passive

@Jungalians_KL

They are also usually 3 allies in a campaign, not 4.

Not usually, always

(Sorry if I seem so corrective, I just don’t want them getting incorrect feedback)

[Jungalians_KL]

Yes, you are right here. I just wish the best for this person if they choose to make concepts.

[Darkshadow7]

Sorry this was my first time.

[Darkshadow7]

But I’ll allow you all to do your version of Skylar.

[the_One_and_Only1]

I’d like to point out that you can only have up to three allies per disk, because only five heroes can take up a whole lineup, including Skylar and the hero she is friends with.

[Jungalians_KL]

Yes, that’s perfectly right.

@Jungalians_KL

They are always 3 allies in a campaign, not 4.

[Darkshadow7]

Like I said this is my first time doing a concept. You could do your version of Skylar’s hero concept.