2nd bugs life concept the mini monarch

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#1

The queen and aphid bugs life

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STATS
2 stars
Support
Quote- “ok everyone single file food to the offering stone and into the anthill lets go”
Description- this mighty queen and her pet take the battlefield by experaince
Trial team- blue
ANNIMATIONS
Entrance -the queen walks onto the battlefield and gets fanned by ants holding leaves
Victory- the queen laughs
Deffeat- she grips aphid
SKILLS
Basic attack- aphid spits up on enemies dealing x damage

White skill- Loyal subjects
The queen orders her ants to stampede enemies dealing x amount of damage

Green skill- Royal treatment
The queens leaf fans heal allies x and remove debuffs

Blue skill- Royal motivation
The queen rallies her allies which gives them health back and makes them attack 2x faster for 10 seconds

Purple skill- Leaf barricade
Royal treatment now shield allies for 5 seconds

Red skill- Mighty Monarch
At the start ot battle the weakest ally gets a shield that lasts for 8 seconds. When the shield ends the ally gets x hp and tendency
+x hp
+x shield
+x tendency

Friends

Laid back queen
Queen and aphid and the queen of hearts
Allies -yax, Alice, miguel
Disk- Shiepds now heal

Inventors life for me
Flik , queen and aphid
Allies- syndrome, Tigger, magica dispell
Disk- shields stun enemies

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#2

Please post all feeback and vote in the poll

#3

4/10 1st:
You Need Pictures Not Just Words
2nd: Kinda Bad Roles
Why Support? I Think Control.
3rd: Misspellings
Leaves = Leafs
4th: This Many Words Without Punctuation?!
5th: The Inventors Life For Me Makes NO SENSE.
And Lastly…: So Many Skills That Are For The Entrance! :frowning:

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#4

1st I never use pictures for concepts
2. Vote in the poll the winner is what I choose
3. Can you point out areas where I’m mispelling
4. The portal of leaf is leaves not leafs
5. Inventor life for me is a pun based on a pirates life for me song
I don’t understand what you mean for the lastly statement
Thanks for your feeback

#5

Where would you find any form of control in this concept?

No, they’re right. Leaf plural is leaves.

What do you mean by that?

There was only one…

Anyways onto my feedback on the concept.

You’re on the right track, however your missing variables and your format is a bit off. Also, maybe take a look on what role you think is good and not ask other people on what role it should be.

If you want to learn on how to make a concept correctly: here.

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#6

Why don’t you? It gives us an idea of how it looks and really enhances the character concept.

Well, The basic attack doesn’t have a hyphen, so we get confused, same thing with the Entrance and quote.

Also. The Green, blue, purple, and red skill don’t have variables. The red should also have 3 extra boosts.

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#7

Where are the additional stat boost?

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#8

What do you mean

#9

Every single red skill is supposed to have three stat boosts.
For example. (using your character, hope you don’t mind)
+X Max HP
+X Armor
+X Damage to Loyal subjects

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