Ariel concept 3

[Lolkid]

Ariel: frontline, range damage dealer , blue team
stars:
Quote:”I came here to protect other and to save my home”
She appear from a lighting strike
Her victory pose is she does a diving trick
Her defeat animation she get shock with lightning and fades to dust

Basic attack:shoots a lightning bolt that chains damage on multiple enemies

White skill(storm of Poseidon)”true damage”: Ariel spawns a storms from Poseidon wrath in the storm enemies are dealt tick damage and have there movement speed reduce until the storm ends. Ariel and Her allies are heal overtime and gain a attack speed boost for 3 seconds until the storm ends. The storm lasts for 15 seconds

Green skill(tidal wave)”fantastic damage”:Ariel summons a whirlpool from her trident dealing damage to all enemies and knocking them back

Blue skill(bubble shield)”fantastic damage”:Ariel uses her trident to protect herself granting Ariel and a closest ally with a shield for 5 seconds after a short delay or if enemies destroy the shield when any ally or Ariel is near an enemy the shield will burst dealing area damage.

Purple skill(harden shell):Ariel is immune to knock ups and knock backs if your are dealt damage your will gain armor overtime(gaining armor overtime has a chance to fail at level 41)

Red skill(protector of the ocean): when any of her allies deal true or fantastic damage they gain x health base on there how much armor they have. If Ariel deal true damage she gains armor base on how much health she has. And if a enemy knocks up or knocks back her allies there will gain invincible for 6 seconds(gaining allies invincible has a chance to fail above level 112)
x skill power
x health
x armor

Friendships: urlsa,Gerald

Urlsa disc (ocean keeper):
X skill power
Extends the shields duration on bubble shield
When damage is done to enemies with the shield it will do extra damage

Gerald disc(friends from the sea)
X basic attack damage
X armor
When Ariel damages enemies with tidal wave or storm of Poseidon the damage will also gain life steal from basic attacks

Tick damage is damage overtime
They add knock ups to future heroes
4 star is a future hero rarity they will cost 120 chips to unlock her
Life steal only works on basic attacks

[Myeong]

Where are her entrance, victory, and defeat animations?

@Lolkid

White skill(storm of Poseidon)”true damage”: Ariel spawns a storms from Poseidon wrath in the storm enemies are dealt tick damage and slowed down until the storm ends. You and your allies are heal overtime and gain a attack speed boost until the storm ends.

… What is “tick damage”? Also, skills do not include words like “you” and “your” in them. Is the slow an attack or a movement speed slow? Or both? And how long do it and the speed boost last for?

@Lolkid

Blue skill(bubble shield)”fantastic damage”:Ariel uses her trident to protect herself granting you and a closest ally with a shield for 5 seconds after the time is up when any ally or you is near an enemy the shield will burst dealing area damage.

Again, who is “you”? Ariel? Also… the second effect could be worded more clearly.

@Lolkid

Purple skill(harden shell): you are immune to knock ups and knock backs if your are dealt damage your will gain armor overtime(gaining armor overtime has a chance to fail at level 41)

Use “Ariel”, not “you”, please. Also what are “knock ups”??? And how does the “armor overtime” work?

@Lolkid

Red skill(protector of the ocean): when any of your allies deal true or fantastic damage they gain x health base on there maximum armor. If your deal true damage your gain armor base on your maximum health. And if a enemy knock up or knock back your allies your grant them invincible for 6 seconds(granted allies invincible has a chance to fail above level 112)

What is “health base” or “armor base”?

What do the Friendship Disks do?

And you’re missing variables.

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