Ash ketchum and pikachu dou charther concept spicel birthday concept

OIP (3)

There is an image of ash and pikachu

Role damage

Qoute i choose you!

Team trial color yellow (the pokemon franchise s symbol is yellow)

Enternce ash will come with pikachu and his pikachu will jump to the battlefiled

Defeat pikachu will be fainted and his ash will run to pikachu s direction

Victory ash and pikachu will do a high five and will jump happily

White skill flare blitz

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Ash will call inferape from its pokeball and it will use flare blitz on single enemy dealing normal damage to 1 enemie and burning him for x seconds

Green skill water shuriken OIP (5)

Ash will call his greninja will use the move the move water shuriken in this skill ash s greninja will throw 5 water shurikens to 5 random enemies dealing fantastic damage this skill will target 5 enemies this skill also knocking back enemies

Blue skill 10000000 milion volts thundetbolt הורדה (4)

Ash s pikachu will peform will the z move 10000000 volts thunderbolt causing fantatic damage on all enemies and stuning them to x seconds

Purple skill battle bond after ash s greninja beating an enemie he will turn to his ash greninja form in this forms his speed movement and basic damage will get boosted

Red skill alola league champion ash s pikachu have now chance to land true damage on enemies when they are under cretin amount of hp when using 10000000 volts thundetbolt

Friendships mickey mouse and megavolt

The mickey mouse disc will cause the disables on enemies getting longer by 2 seconds per star and increaseing damage on debuff enemies

The megavolt disc will cause ash and pikachu and their allies getting energized it will also grant additional skill power and basic damage

As always feedback will be welcome by everyobe

Spelling Errors:

From the title:

  • dou -> duo
  • charther -> character
  • spicel -> special

Quote

Franchise’s

Entrance

Battlefield

Not a spelling mistake but his Ash? Pikachu doesn’t own Ash.

Pikachu’s

Infernape

Enemy

Remove one ‘the move’

Ash’s

Thunderbolt

Ash’s

Remove ‘will’ and ‘z’

Fantastic

Stunning

For x seconds

Ash’s

Beats or defeats

Enemy

Form

Ash’s

Now has a chance

Certain

Thunderbolt

To be increased by…

Increasing

Debuffed

To be energized

Everyone


Concept Feedback:

  • The white skill is good but there are a few variable tweaks you should make
    • Remove the x from in front of the seconds as that should be a set number e.g. 5
    • Include an X before normal damage to indicate that this is what is increased each level.
  • The green skill is pretty good
    • Include a variable before fantastic damage for the same reason as above
    • Try breaking it up into 2 or 3 sentences to avoid clumps of text that aren’t very fluent
  • The blue skill is ok
    • Same feedback as the white skill in terms of what to do with variables.
  • Purple skill is good
  • The red skill is really creative
    • Try including the extra 3 additional stat boosts in the future.
  • Friendships are OK
    • Try separating the Disk Power and Memory variables to make it easier to understand
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What about the red akill though?

It needs the additional stat boosts, the extra 3 variables at the bottom and f each Red Skill.

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