Hi Fans! Cricket Green from Big City Greens is here
White Skill:Claping is healing
Cricket Claps His Hands to heal the team
Green Skill:Kicker and Jumper
He Jumps 2 times and kick the monsters in 11 hp
Um… you shouldn’t post the skills one by one, you should better put them all together, okay?
Blue skill:Animal Fight
He whistle and the animals come the battle to hit the monster
I am sorry i can not do the whole paragraph
Purple Skill:dodge over
He dodges the monsters
Friendships
Huey Dewey and Louie-Cricket green
Mickey-Cricket green
How about his red Skill, entrance, defeat, and victory?
Red Skill:Best Friends
Remy Comes up and help cricket
Victory He said woohoo
Lose he fell down
He is a control hero
I doubt you have that much trouble typing a whole lot paragraph. Next time post the concept in one post.
Cricket Green from Big City Greens
Chance to be in the game: 1-5%
I apologize for the messy Rating but I just worked with what I have
Role: Control
Victory: Cricket says “Woohoo!”
Defeat: He falls down
White Skill: Cricket claps to heal the team
Green Skill: Cricket jumps twice and kicks the enemies
Blue Skill: Cricket whistles and animals stampede to damage the enemies
Purple Skill: Cricket now dodges attacks
Red Skill: Remy (Remmington) comes up and helps Cricket
Friendships: Cricket and HD&L | Cricket and Mickey Mouse
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Not sure why’d you put Cricket as a Control when there wasn’t a single Skill that has a Crowd Control / Disable.
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How does one clapping heal someone?
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Cricket jumping twice and then kicking the Enemies takes too much time, which is something you’d want to avoid in a fight. I also suggest using variables like X or Y instead of numbers, which is 11 in your case.
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Blue Skill has no other effect than to damage the enemies. Although Stunning would be nice, but that makes the Blue Skill like Felix’ White Skill.
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You didn’t specify what percentage of Attacks Cricket Dodges. Unless you’re making Cricket’s Purple Skill like Peter Pan’s White Skill, then it’s not going to work.
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Red Skill isn’t that clear. How will Remy help Cricket? Is this like Hiro’s Megabot?
Afternotes:
- Just to add, how can you claim to not write a paragraph when you can hit [enter]? Doesn’t that help you make a paragraph?
God has left the server.
This conpect is preety bad trust me i seen bad concpets here and this 1 is bad i dont think he will be added there no mentioning off him or badges realtead to the show is so the greens in big city charthers have low chace to come in general
Your concepts aren’t exactly worthy to be in the Louvre either. Be constructive.
What? at least i makeing more efforts in my conpets how you dare to say my concprts are bad?
Every Concept isn’t perfect, if they have flaws, we point them out nicely, that’s why we have Constructive Criticism.