Chatter Chatter- Likely concept

Here is my new concept of Perry the Platypus,hopefully u enjoy! :grin:

Basic Info

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Bio- A normal pet platypus in the day,and a secret agent at night. This platypus uses his technology to harm enemies
Stars-2
Role/Position- Front Line Damage
Quote- Chatter Chatter
Entrance- Walks in on all fours then stands up and puts his hat on
Victory- Tips his hat
Defeat- Changes back into Normal Perry then walks off the battlefield
Basic Attack- Kicks and punches enemies dealing X damage

Skills

White Perry uses his grappling hook and swings across the and kicks all enemies,dealing X damage and stunning the Front most enemy for 10 seconds. (Damage Type: Fantastic)

Green Perry uses his wristwatch and scans the enemy with the least HP,dealing X damage and making him precise for 8 seconds. (Damage Type: Normal)

Blue Every 5th Basic Attack,Perry changes back into his normal self,creating a shield of X HP around him and making him invincible for 12 seconds.

Purple Perryā€™s White Skill now steals 300 energy from the stunned enemy. If the stunned enemy has no energy they are instead dealt X Damage (Damage Type: Fantastic)

Red The laser in Perryā€™s Green Skill now goes through the enemy and deals X damage to all of the other enemies behind them. Perry becomes precise for an additional 2 seconds for each enemy hit.

When Perryā€™s shield is destroyed he creates a shield equal to 75% of his MAX HP around allies.

  • X max HP
  • Y Skill Power
  • Z more damage dealt to stunned enemies
Friends

Perry/Darkwing
Allies Launchpad,Mickey,Mushu
Disk Water Terror
Buff 1 Perry now heals for X HP per second he is Invisible. Plus Y HP per star
Buff 2 + X max HP while invisible

Perry/Kim
Allies Goofy,Madam Mim,Drakken
Disk Elite Precision
Buff 1 Perry the Platypus now gifts allies 250 energy when he becomes precise. Plus 50 energy per star
Buff 2 + X more damage dealt while precise

Upcoming Concept

I will be Releasing Pikachu on 5/9/21

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I am accepting all feedback (but Keep it respectful)

Please do not put it on hide details.

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Why not? I have seen plenty of people do itā€¦

@Mister_Toon? HeĀ“s the only one that IĀ“ve seen that makes it this way. ItĀ“s better the other way.

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This is the only time I will do Hide details,I just wanted to do it this one time,but please comment on the actual concept and not that :unamused:

I am reading itā€¦

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Ok thats fair,ill delete that comment

(I couldnā€™t think of skill names,I havenā€™t seen the show in a while,I mostly just went off of memory)

I think the shield is enough

I mean, the skill already does damage, what about ā€œremoving all the buffs the enemy hasā€

You mean the one from his blue?

This fits more in the the friendship disks or in the other part of the RS

I think in star effects you always have to specify, so like this: ā€œhe heals 5% of his max HP, + 5% per starā€ or something like that and as I said instead of when he is invincible, when he has the shiled. I think the invincibility is unnecesary.

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Iā€™ll fix that

More damage never hurts

Yeah,Iā€™ll fix that

I might leave it though

I will starts doing that from now on

No. you canĀ“t leave it. The stat bosts donĀ“t work like that.

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I mean,I will leave it right now. But on a rework Iā€™ll fix it

Whatā€™s wrong with the way i do concept? Itā€™s more organized and itā€™s easier to read.

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I donā€™t think he was insulting you

I think he was saying u were the only person who did such a format

:grimacing:
I mean, for some stuff the hide details is better, yes. To keep stuff organized and things like that. But a concept is smaller, and itĀ“s easier to read without having to open the details. Besides, looks better.

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I only did the Format to see how I came out,I kinda liked it,and I may do it a few times more,but weā€™ll see

Noā€¦ itā€™s not. Itā€™s really not.

To add on, with hidden details, it doesnā€™t even look like a concept.

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@Mister_Toon and @Filadae_Djaq Do u guys have any thoughts on my concept?

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