I realized what happened I think.
Since there were no votes there back then, there were basically no votes to show.
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The final choice for this chapter is out.
That wasnât really meant to happen by choosing make ends meet, but okay 
See how Jafar likes us now (if we go with what i voted for) 
HumâŠ, given what I assume to be the in character option for our main character given thatâs he is a Noble and have [Manners] as a trait and skill I think the {Where is your thief hunter?} make the most sense for him.
Beside that fact, if he actually help he has the most likely chance of getting back his gold the thief stole from him if it is the same thief, so for that angle I think it would be the best strategic point for him.
While I donât think he like helping Jafar, but {If it is so simple, why havenât you done it?} it too blunt and risky to say most likely, as well as out of character in my view.
A refusal like {I apologize, but I have to decline Sultan Jafar + âdue to (X)â } using [Manners] would have been the exit with the trait line he already has as a Noble with the skill [Manners].
And no worries, Champion_David, I am not criticizing or anything, just doing a character analysis you could say based on what I gather based on what I have seen so far :-).
Beside that it is interesting just to think and ponder in my view, like getting this invested as I enjoy this a lot ^^.
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Can I just say this: the thief that we have to chase after with the thief hunterâŠcould she possibly be princess jasmine? it would make some sense due to jafar overthrowing her father
Technically yes potentiallyâŠ, but didnât Jafar originally want to make Jasmine his Queen?
If so, depending on how things in the end went then Jasmine might be magically forced to love Jafar and marry him, so depends on if that happened I think.
if Jasmine managed to flee and not be bound by the wish spell, then yes the thief could be her even though not sure if she is the type to become a thief.
We will see I suppose.
Well thatâs just how ypu would define Noble in a way. I interpreted it as also looking out for those who are in need (and in this case standing up to an oppressive government)
That I can agree with and I do think he would maybe be what he wants to do as in the right thing to do, but like I said the other option seem out of character to me, so I had to go with what I felt was in character out of the two options.
Beside that, if he gets back his gold he can give some of the gold he has to help people in need, so it is more so in my view to continue to help in secret rather than bluntly oppose and maybe be captured for disloyalty.
But yeah, a [Manners] based refusal option is probably what I would have gone for otherwise if it had been an option, or at least be more unsure what is the best pick considering the future story wise.
Probably maybe a bit different in style and not sure if this person is actually a male or female, but I imagine Troy maybe having a similar feel as this person in the painting:
What do others of you think?
Iâm trying to keep a balance of skills, so not every choice has any skill options.
Iâm glad you are enjoying it! 
As for which choice to make, no comment. 
Fair enough :-).
Just more so that in this case the other option seemed out of character for him to say that way, so had to go with with what felt in character for him to say.
Not really a matter of skills here, but rather the matter of being true to the character and what makes sense for them to say.
No problem at all and definitely enjoying myself a lot in terms of taking part in this story ^^.
Never asked you, and yeah I rather not get spoiled ;-).
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This being the last choice, Chapter 2 will begin tomorrow. Meanwhile, Iâd like to take a brief survey.
Is there enough text in between choices?
- Perfect amount of text
- There should be more
- I donât mind either way.
0 voters
How do you feel about the importance of each choice?
- You should scrap choices that donât impact the story much
- Keep it as is.
- Let us make more smaller choices.
0 voters
Is there any think I could do that would make it more enjoyable for you? I canât promise to do it, but Iâll at least read it.
Really close in the current story poll situation I see.
As for the feedback in terms of chapter 2 and such, I donât mind if we have more text or not, but might be better for the general audience that the amount is kept the same as it is bit sized enough now.
Personally I wouldnât be against smaller choices, but I think for the story flow the current amount is likely better.
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Okay, Chapter 1 is complete. To conserve space, Chapter 2 is within the same post as chapter 1. Your next choiceis there.
Next choice is out.
I knew it was jasmine!! But the question isâŠare we gonna have to catch Jasmine or are gonna have the choice of betraying Aladdin and gaining jasmine as an ally??
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A question you should ask, but not one I will answer 
Next choice is out.
Hum⊠.
Kind of wondering if the main character even have money on him after his money bag got stolen.
If not then it is a choice that could only happen with the Path in terms of snatching back the gold, so if so the choice of giving money is impossible to fulfill.
And beside that, interesting that Aladdin is that loyal to Jafar even if yes for logical reasons, but one could nearly kind of wonder if Aladdin and Jasmine had their arc together at all or not given the kind of vibe Aladdin gave without even pausing for a second to think back.
At the very least it will be interesting to see how the story goes :-).
You have more coin now, from Aladdin, to use as bait. So thatâs why you can make either choice.
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