Dumbo Concept “You’ve maybe seen a bee fly, but you’ve never seen an Elephant Fly!”

Agrun · July 16, 2023, 8:28pm

Get ready, this elephant will fly across the battlefield with his ear wings, watch out, the creeps are gonna be terrified!

Dumbo from Disney’s Dumbo

Blue
2 Star
Frontline
Damage
“Elephant noises”

Entrance: Dumbo flies in the battlefield with his feather
Victory: Dumbo flies happily around the battlefield
Defeat: Dumbo sneezes, grows big ears and collapses
Basic Attack: Dumbo calls Timothy, Timothy scares the enemies

White: It’s a flying elephant!
Dumbo flies around the enemies, stunning them for 10 seconds, Dumbo gains 12 hardy stacks for a duration. Dumbo’s health reduces 12% of +Max HP.

Green: Timothy Q. Mouse and Dumbo
Timothy helps Dumbo, he scares the enemies, the enemies jump, while Dumbo flies, bumps into them, and the enemies health lose 11% of their health for 5 seconds, dealing +5 damage.

Blue: Healin’ for the allies
Dumbo splashes water on the weakest ally with the least Max HP and +Skill Power, it increases the speed of the ally, and deals +damage over all.

Purple: Time to fly
Dumbo uses his “It’s a flying elephant” skill, he stuns the enemies and reduces 12 hardy stacks for a duration.

Red: The Duo
Dumbo uses his “Timothy Q. Mouse and Dumbo” skill, he reduces 11% of his health.

Additional Stat Boosts
+heal for weakest blue team ally
+11% for “The Duo”
+5 stuns for a duration

Friends:
Dumbo and Mickey Mouse
Dumbo and Tarzan

Dumbo and Mickey: With a little bit of mice

disk name: Friend-It

Mickey is gardening, until he sees dumbo and timothy, curious, he runs to find them stuck in a hole, Dumbo and Mickey fight creeps and gain 13+ hardy stacks and +Max HP for 6 seconds.

Disk Power: 21,000+

Allies: Simba and Nala, Snow White, Kermit and Ms. Piggy

Dumbo and Tarzan: Singin’ like a Canary

disk name: Wild

Tarzan is swinging from vine to vine when he notices an elephant flying around, he goes to say hi, they fight creeps and use +Max HP and reduce 12 hardy stacks!

Disk power: 12,000+

Allies: Animal, Elsa, Anna and Jasmine

That’s all I’ve for all of you, please feel free to lend me some constructive criticism so I can improve for my 3rd concept

Captain_Poole · July 17, 2023, 5:52am

This is a great concept thought I was thinking that Dumbo could shoot peanuts out of his trunk if he was in the game.

Agrun · July 17, 2023, 7:26am

Thanks, I love it when you said it, oh… hey I would love it if Dumbo could shoot Peanuts out of his trunk!

Morsat · July 17, 2023, 11:55am

This isn’t very clear……

Does it mean he gets +12% of his max HP? Or does he mean after this skill his max HP reduces by 12%?

I don’t exactly understand. 5 damage is VERY small. The amount of damage a hero deals for each skill is determined by mods, SP, hero level, rank, and even sometimes friendship disks. I recommend if you have a skill that envolves dealing damage, just say “X (normal, true, fantastic) damage”

Is this the debuff scare, or is it just the verb?

You don’t have to say this. If you want to that’s ok, but it’s just not needed because of when you say “with the least Max HP and Skill Power”

Attack or movement speed, or both? Also, by how much?

You mean damage over time? And how much damage (X%)

From himself or enemies? And does the Purple Skill not apply if the enemy/ally has no or less than 12 stacks of hardy?

Once again, scales with level of skill. Use “X%”

You mean +X healing over time for 6 seconds? Also, friendship disks scale with the amount of stars on the disk. I suggest using “X seconds”

Once again…… what if enemies have no stacks of hardy. And, once again (again), the amount of reduced hardy stacks scales up with the amount of stars on that disk. Please use (X stacks)

Both disks also include stat boosts, sort of like the red skill. Three for each disk.

This was a good concept, however, some aspects (as explained above) could use improvement!