I deleted my old concept because he’s in the game.
You might want to check out this guide before making your next concept as it might help to neaten up the formatting.
- You should always try to include a picture where possible
- A description, trials team, initial stars and role aren’t essential but often make the concept feel more complete
- A description of the basic attack is good to include in your concepts
- Try tidying up the formatting and make sure to read your concept through before posting because some of the sentences are awkward to read.
- Try to include friendships in your concepts
What sort of damage does this deal? Normal? Fantastic? True?
Try using X for your variable instead of a line
Same as with the white skill, what type of damage?
Is this a percentage? Or is it a variable increase to basic damage or skill power?
Maybe have the active do something else given that the passive already increases armour.
Same as earlier, use X.
What are the other bonus stats?
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That doesn’t mean they can’t make a concept of him 
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Please don’t spoil “datamined” characters
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I said this was a concept or idea, I didn’t even know he was datamined!
Do not spoil 