Finn the Hero Part 2

Blue: Finn makes Mater go in the Shower (The Japan Shower) and he put toxic in it and heal 200 XP to the Heroes.

Green: When Finn says “Roger that!”, The Heroes all get Shields.

Purple: When Finn uses his Super Move, He increases his Blue move to attack the EDV, and to be continued in Part 3 (Gosh, I forgot to say that in Part 1 that i will be making Part 2, Dang it!)…

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Just seeing a concept split into two posts is hurting my eyes. Plus, it’s messy. At least crop your images so we don’t have to see the internet borders and what you searched for to find the pictures, if you’re not going to just download the pictures.

Green skill doesn’t make any sense.

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I don’t get it

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Idk what the frick this is even talking about and Blue would need to change to any ally not just mater because mater isn’t in the game

You didn’t have to make several parts for one Hero Concept, as it is 1) unnecessary and 2) crowds the Forums.

We’ll see how his skills will do…


Stats

Hero Role - unknown
Hero Team - unknown
Stars - 3 (taken from the White Skill’s description)
Position - unknown

Hero Images - They’re good enough on their own, just make sure you download them instead of screencapping it and just drawing on it, as it makes it messy.

Score: 2/10

White Skill - (Skill Name required)

Finn spins for five seconds and damages enemies while blinding them? Good skill…

Score: 5/10

"Super Move" - (Skill Name required)

I don’t know what a “Super Move” is, but it seems like it’s a White Skill, which makes this redundant.

Do note that the game doesn’t allow 5 Skills, so having a “Super Move” is impossible

This “Super Move” is still very convoluted. How will Finn basically do it? Does he touch something like an Item Box?

Score: 1/10

Green Skill - (Skill Name required)

The Skill’s very bland, it’s Violet’s active sans the Hero jumping back…

Score: 2/10

Blue Skill - (Skill Name required)

This Skill would be both useless and convoluted. Using the Skill’s Description, Finn calls Mater out of nowhere and forces him to go to the showers and heals the team?

This is weird, considering that I haven’t seen anything regarding Mater…

Score: 1/10

Purple Skill - (Skill Name required)

Finn’s Purple Skill is directly linked to his “Super Move,” but as I said, the Super Move is very unlikely to be added because there could be no more than 4 Skills…

Score: 0/10

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You got the point

Sin Counter (Parts 1 & 2)


Quote

  • No Quote? Pretty sure he can talk (+1)

Stars

  • Not actually clarified (+1)

Team

  • Unknown (+1)

Role/Position

  • Let me get a randomizer wheel! (+1)

Images

  • Can’t you just download them instead just taking a screenshot and making sketches with messy handwriting? For all of that, 5 sins (+5)

Basic Attack

  • Where is it? (+1)

White Skill - ???

  • No name! (+1)
  • Where will the dust come from? How can you burn your tires in little time in just a few minutes when you aren’t even moving? Won’t spinning also throw dust at allies? (+3)
  • At least you said dust can blind enemies (-1)

“Super Move” - I CAME AS A RANDOM MACHINE

  • Super Move’s don’t exist. The White Skills is the “Super Move” (+1)
  • The name is too long (+1)
  • Where will the machine come from? Boxes? This isn’t Super Mario Kart (+1)
  • Advertising! (+1)
  • Damage can and will change when upgrading skills. Forgot to say that for the white skill (+2)

Green Skill - ???

  • What should I name it? (+1)
  • When have you ever said “Roger That” and police came to give you a bulletproof vest and protection from the force? Never! Also “Roger that” means “understood” (+5)

Blue Skill - ???

  • A mysterious skill (+1)
  • Pretty sure Mater can be a separate character (+1)
  • Where will the bathroom appear from? (+1)
  • What are you gonna use to get the stall? A toilet company? (+1)
  • Toxic? Mater showered with soap and water. And the toxic heals? I remember people dying of TOXIC gas (+10)
  • Heal XP? It is called HP (+1)

Purple Skill - ???

  • Uses super move to increase blue skill? What the heck? Super moves don’t exist! (+5)
  • Who is the EDV? (+1)
  • Part 3?! (+10)
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Sin Counter: 56


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I’m pretty sure EDV stands for E______ Digital Viruses, i.e. Creeps…

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