I choose you- Unlikely Concept

This is my Unlikely Concept for Pikachu from Pokemon

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Bio-The Electric mouse Pokemon,Pikachu,electrocutes enemies to give them the shock to their lives
Stars-2
Role/Position- Mid Line Damage
Quote- “Pika pi
Team- Yellow
Entrance- Runs into Position
Victory Rubs his Cheeks
Defeat Falls over and cries
Basic Attack- Uses an electric attack dealing X damage (Damage Type: Fantastic)

White
Thunder Bolt (Fantastic)

Passive- During his basic attack,Pikachu applies 1 stack of Charge on enemies

Active- Pikachu sends a lighting Bolt towards enemies,dealing X damage and Y more damage per stack of Charge

Green
Electro Ball
Pikachu sends an electric ball towards the enemy with the most HP,dealing X damage and stunning them for 12 seconds. This also applies 3 stacks of Charges on that enemy

Blue
Spark
Pikachu electricutes the ally with the lowest skill power,increasing their basic Damage and their confidence by 100%.

The buff is less effective in allies above level X.

Purple
Thunder Shock
Thunder Bolt now stuns enemies for 14 seconds and removes X MAX HP for each stack of Charged they had on them.

Red
Long Time Companion
When Pikachu uses Electro Ball enemies are now stunned for 15 seconds and are dealt X damage per second

Spark now increases the allies attack speed by 75% and their Max HP by 125%

+X HP

  • X Basic Damage
  • 2 stacks of Charge during basic attack

Pikachu/Megavolt
Allies- Darkwing,Scrooge,Basil
Disk Shocking Withdrawl
Buff Pikachus attack speed is now increased by 8% each time he places a stack of Charged on an enemy
Star Buff + 5% per star
Level Buff + X Basic Crit

Pikachu/Baymax
Allies- Hiro,Mickey,Wall-E
Disk- Electric Medicine
Buff- Pikachu now heals himself for X when he absorbs stacks of Charged
Star Buff- Plus Y HP per star
Level Buff- + X max HP

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I know for a fact my concept isn’t good,how do I have no feedback for comments :disappointed:

If you want I can give you grammar and spelling feedback…

Haha,very funny

Do you have any actual feedback @Spark?

I’m not great with the stats in this game so I’m not “qualified” to do feedback on the concept, but I can tell you all of the spelling/grammar errors…

Sure I guess,idrc

Who said that?!

That’s actually not true if you’d ask me. The charge system in combination with the purple skill works really interestingly.

The only minor things are in the disks. This star effect can be a little higher (say +5% per star)

And this works better as variable (like a percentage of Max HP)

But overall good concept! So don’t be so negative about your own work!

Well when you usually get negative feedback, u start to believe it

I have feedback for you

So like Megavolt’s “Charged”?

Yeah,exactly like that

I did.

If this is a title, then it should have the “M” in “mouse” capitalized, if not, just call it “The electric mouse”

There should be a space after the comma. This is an issue I see a lot. All of the instances in this concept:

(This “Walle” is actually spelt “WALL-E”)

And only one spelling error (I think)

Should be “medicine”
Also, for the descriptions of the skills, it is inconsistent if you end them with a period or not.
If I spot anything else, I will let you know. :wink:

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If I could get more votes on this poll and my other one,that’d be great!

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