Idea for Coldstone

[Phil_Yugofreak]

Coldstone is one of the minor Character from the “Gargoyles” series.

In DHBM: He is going to be an front-line “Damage” Character

Description: This Gargoyle is reborn as a Cyborg, hunting the opponents down with his gadgets and Gargoyle-Instincts.
Line: “We are no longer Gargoyles. We are… Shadows”
Entrance: He flies down, entering the battle field
Victory: He is just smiling
Defeat: He falls down, while getting a system failure

White Skill: Cyber-Assault (Real Damage)
Coldstone is calling Coldsteel and Coldfire to form a combo-attack of all three, dealing damage to the closest 3 opponents. The side effects depends on the role, the opponent is:
Damage: The Opponent is gonna be stunned for 10 seconds
Support: The Opponent gets burned for 10 seconds. Burned Opponents are getting damage over time
Tank: The Opponent gets slowed down for 10 seconds
Control: The Opponent gets a random side effect
(The Chance, getting a Side Effect, is lower, when the Skill level is below the Opponents level)

Green Skill: Electric Armor
Coldstone starts the fight with a Shield.
When Coldstone loses his shield, he instantly gets 200 Energy (He can get less Energy, when the Skill level is below his own level)

Blue Skill: Powerful Raygun (Real Damage)
Coldstone is shooting a Ray out of his gun, that is dealing Damage to all his opponents. Coldstone gets following Power-Ups, depending on the opponents, Coldstone has hit:
Damage: Precise for 10 seconds
Support: Studying for 10 seconds
Tank: Speed up for 10 seconds
Control: Random Power-Up
(The Chance, getting a Power-Up, is lower, when the Skill level is below his own level)

Purple Skill: The best from two sides (passive)
When Coldstone is using “Cyber-Assault” or “Powerful Raygun”, the Opponent with the “Control”-Role is gonna get all side effects and Coldstone is getting all Power-Ups instead (The Power-Up can be stacked up, but this skill is less effective, when this skill level is below his own level)

Red Skill: Cybernetic-Rule (passive + extra)
When Coldstone loses a Shield, Coldstone is granting all his allies a Shield with 25% of his max. HP. On top of that, all his allies are getting more armor, more reality and more critical damage, while the Shield is active
(The Chance, granting a Shield, is lower, when this skill level is below the level of your allies)

• Critical damage
• Shield
• Damage from “Cyber-Assault”

Friendships:
Coldstone with Goliath: Gargoyle-Brotherhood
(Shields are invincible)
Shields, that are created by Coldstone, can reflect every attack for 5 seconds

• Shield
• Skill Power

Coldstone with John Silver: Part Flesh, Part Metal
(More Side Effects)
When Coldstone is using “Cyber-Assault”, opponents getting additional side effects, depending on the role:
Damage: lower Damage
Support: lower Skill Power
Tank: lower Armor
Control: lower HP

• normal damage

[Lightningmcqueen_XXVIII]

Good job looks good

[Lightningmcqueen_XXVIII]

what is that supposed to mean

[Phil_Yugofreak]

That actually means, that he can make more normal damage than usual

[Lightningmcqueen_XXVIII]

That’s a good idea

[Myeong]

First of all, you’re missing variables (as in “This skill deals X damage.”)

@Phil_Yugofreak

White Skill: Cyber-Assault (Real Damage)
Coldstone is calling Coldsteel and Coldfire to form a combo-attack of all three, dealing damage to the closest 3 opponents. The side effects depends on the role, the opponent is:
Damage: The Opponent is gonna be stunned for 10 seconds
Support: The Opponent gets burned for 10 seconds. Burned Opponents are getting damage over time
Tank: The Opponent gets slowed down for 10 seconds
Control: The Opponent gets a random side effect
(The Chance, getting a Side Effect, is lower, when the Skill level is below the Opponents level)

Do you mean “TRUE Damage”?

Is the slow effect an attack or a movement speed slow? Or both?

What do you mean by “random side effect”?

Since this skill does damage, you don’t need a “This has a chance to fail against enemies above level X.” here.

@Phil_Yugofreak

Green Skill: Electric Armor
Coldstone starts the fight with a Shield.
When Coldstone loses his shield, he instantly gets 200 Energy (He can get less Energy, when the Skill level is below his own level)

How long does the shield last for?

Also, again, since there would be a variable here for the shield HP, you don’t need a “This has a chance to fail…” on it.

@Phil_Yugofreak

Blue Skill: Powerful Raygun (Real Damage)
Coldstone is shooting a Ray out of his gun, that is dealing Damage to all his opponents. Coldstone gets following Power-Ups, depending on the opponents, Coldstone has hit:
Damage: Precise for 10 seconds
Support: Studying for 10 seconds
Tank: Speed up for 10 seconds
Control: Random Power-Up
(The Chance, getting a Power-Up, is lower, when the Skill level is below his own level)

Again, do you mean “TRUE Damage”?

How do the bonuses work? Are they dependent on which enemies he damages?

What sort of speed buff does he get from “Tank”? Is it attack or is it movement?

And again, what do you mean by “random power-up”?

@Phil_Yugofreak

Purple Skill: The best from two sides (passive)
When Coldstone is using “Cyber-Assault” or “Powerful Raygun”, the Opponent with the “Control”-Role is gonna get all side effects and Coldstone is getting all Power-Ups instead (The Power-Up can be stacked up, but this skill is less effective, when this skill level is below his own level)

You don’t need to write out that this is a passive effect. Purple and Red skills are usually passive effects, anyways.

Also, this seems busted.

@Phil_Yugofreak

Red Skill: Cybernetic-Rule (passive + extra)
When Coldstone loses a Shield, Coldstone is granting all his allies a Shield with 25% of his max. HP. On top of that, all his allies are getting more armor, more reality and more critical damage, while the Shield is active
(The Chance, granting a Shield, is lower, when this skill level is below the level of your allies)

• Critical damage
• Shield
• Damage from “Cyber-Assault”

Normal or Fantastic Crit?

Also, I think you mean “Shield HP”, not just “Shield” for the stat boosts.

@Phil_Yugofreak

Coldstone with Goliath: Gargoyle-Brotherhood
(Shields are invincible)
Shields, that are created by Coldstone, can reflect every attack for 5 seconds

• Shield
• Skill Power

Shields already protect characters from damage. Being able to reflect said damage is a bit too strong.

And again, is “Shield” referring to “Shield HP”?

@Phil_Yugofreak

Coldstone with John Silver: Part Flesh, Part Metal
(More Side Effects)
When Coldstone is using “Cyber-Assault”, opponents getting additional side effects, depending on the role:
Damage: lower Damage
Support: lower Skill Power
Tank: lower Armor
Control: lower HP

• normal damage

What do you mean by “lower HP”? Dealing damage?

And what do you mean by “normal damage”?

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[Mister_Toon]

And on top of that, it’s in the wrong section… again.