Sure! That sounds awesome! How was the newest update?
It’s an improvement over the last one. You may want to try saying some of the dialog out loud though, certain parts seem clunky. 
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Ok thanks for the advice! I wrote it kind of quickly, but I’ll definitely do that next time!
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Sounds interestingly delicious.
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Mushy’s training room
As Mushy continued to work on perfecting his Heat and Mold Wave powers, Grape and Dumpling trained with Eavesman, Herring Aid, and Polarisn’t. Both groups were pleasantly surprised to find that the other group was also strong and fast. The two groups fought each other, dodging and ducking punches and kicks, while also delivering their own attacks. Groans of frustration (mostly from Mushy) and grunts filled the sweat-tinged air.
Over China
In the cockpit, Bobby flew the plane towards the US. He wanted to be back at home with his pandas, helping to clean up the mess from the First Food Fight. But he knew the task at hand was much more important. Every so often, he looked behind him, back at China Carrot. The once presumed to be dead hero was still slumped on the couch. Although the hero was still mostly unconscious, once in a while the words “She’s coming” or “The evil” slipped out of his mouth. Bobby sighed deeply. He had no idea what China was talking about, but he knew that the Food Fight with Evil Eggplant wouldn’t be the last.
On a suburban road.
“Oh, I think we’re close! See? The trails from the flares seem to end only a few miles away in that city!” S’mores said excitedly.
Popcorn, Brock, and S’mores had been walking for many, many hours now. They wondered if they would ever reach the end of the flares, or if it was like a mirage, something they would never reach.
Brock looked at S’mores and Popcorn and smiled wide. “Finally! My feet are killing me! And it’s so hot out! I’m glad there’s no humidity or else I would’ve been boiled alive!”
S’mores started sprinting down the road toward the city in the distance. “Last one there is moldy trash!”
In the outskirts of England
Ron stepped out of the plane and looked around. “Where is the dragon?” he asked the minion next to him.
“He should be over that hill a couple yards away,” the minion replied.
As Ron eagerly rounded the hill, he stopped in his tracks. He wheeled on his minion and seethed through gritted teeth, “Where is the dragon? He’s NOT here!”
The minion cowered under his master’s wrath. “I don’t know. He’s supposed-.”
Ron cut him off. “SUPPOSED?! I don’t want supposed!” Ron took out his phone and dialed his HQ. “Where is the dragon?” he asked angrily.
As Ron listened to his phone, a few feet away, hidden behind some bushes was Sir Oregano and a sleeping Dishi Dragon on a cart. Oregano peered out from behind the bushes. He had found the dragon and loaded him onto the cart when Ron’s plane came into view. Sir Oregano made sure the coast was clear, then carefully started rolling the cart back toward the castle.
Nearby, in England, Orzo was walking around the streets. In the distance rose a great big castle. Since he was still tired, he decided to stop at a sidewalk cafe and have a cup of coffee.
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No BL or Professor Burnt this time. Nothing important happened.
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In England
Ron angrily paced back and forth. He had flown miles and miles to England just to find the Dishi Dragon, who was now gone.
“Blasted Dragon! The only reason we are even here is to find him! I hate England! Their food is terrible: mushy peas, kidney pie,” Ron complained.
While Ron complained, Oregano was wheeling the Dragon back toward the castle. As he passed a small sidewalk cafe, Orzo, who was sitting with a cup of espresso, saw the Dragon he was searching for as well. Quickly, he finished off his coffee, left a tip, and started following Oregano.
Unfortunately, Ron’s minion also saw Oregano and pointed him and the Dragon out to Ron. Smiling fiendishly, Ron began to follow Oregano as well.
Mushy’s HQ roof
Mushy and his friends stood on the roof, trying to shield the sun from their eyes, watching Bobby land his plane. When the plane finally landed, Mushy rushed forward and pulled open the door. Bobby stepped out of the cockpit and hugged Mushy.
“How’s everything?” Bobby asked.
“Good. Now where is he?” Mushy asked a bit impatiently.
Bobby gestured toward China Carrot, still slumped on the couch. Mushy stepped closer to his old mentor and knelt down. “How?” he wondered did China Carrot survive. The group carried China into the HQ towards the infirmary.
While Grape started gathering medical supplies, the front door buzzed, so Dumpling went to check who it was. Soon after, Dumpling returned with three new people.
Dumpling told Mushy that they were Popcorn, S’mores, and Brock, that their homes had been destroyed by EE, and that they saw the Food Flares and wanted to help fight.
Just then Mushy got a call on his cell. He picked up and as he listened, his face began to go through a range of emotions. When he hung up, he sighed.
“Well looks like you won’t have to wait very long to help. King Garlic just called and told me they found Dishi Dragon but that the Rigatoni Raiders have also landed in England to capture him. We have to get to England fast since the King is worried there will be a fight there,” Mushy told the group.
On the bed, China started moaning and sat up. Mushy rushed over to him and asked how he was feeling. China told Mushy he was feeling him and that he wanted to help fight. Mushy started to protest, but remembered how stubborn his mentor could be and decided to not argue.
China got off the bed and told the group he knew how to get to England fast. He pulled out a round flat device and said that this Transporter could get them anywhere fast.
“Where did you get that? I don’t remember that,” Mushy asked.
“I have my secrets. I didn’t teach you everything yet,” China smiled.
And with that, the group gathered their weapons and China activated the Transporter.
Professor Burnt and Black Licorice stepped inside BL’s HQ. It was full of deadly and diabolical weapons. As he looked around, Professor Burnt was delighted.
“Take as many weapons as you can. We have a fight soon in England,” Black Licorice told him.
“England? Why?”
“My partner has told me the Dishi Dragon was found there. If we get Dishi on our side, we will be unstoppable!”
After the two finished gathering all the weapons they could, Black Licorice activated her own Transporter.
“Hey you never told me? What’s the secret weapon?” Burnt asked her.
Black Licorice looked at Burnt and smiled. “You’ll see soon enough.”
Ok this wasn’t great since I didn’t really proofread it and it was written fast, but I wanted to make an update to the story. And if you thought the plot was rushed, then you’d be right. As I’ve said, I’m writing other stories for myself and writing so many stories is tiring so i decided to finish Part 2 really quick. There was probably gonna be like 3-5 more parts to the story, but that’s not gonna happen now. The next update will be the end of Part 2. And i probably won’t be writing Part 3 for a while.
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I can see Professor B. being so excited by so many weapons in one place.
P.B: “Now this is awesome . . . You have any new gun barrels? The one on my scrambled egg pistol snapped.”
B.L: “Yes, act- You have a scrambled egg pistol?”
P.B: “Um . . . You don’t?”
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I enjoyed reading both of the previous parts. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the support! Makes me want to keep writing!
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ok this was very bad since I wrote it very quickly, didn’t proofread it, and I am tired and wanted to finish the story quickly. its also VERY But here’s the final part to Part 2. And again I won’t be writing more for a while but other people can write their own superhero stories. And it doesn’t have to be about food, but i think @PawpsicleSticks had an idea for “Doughnut Guy?” Anyway…here
As Rigatoni Ron walked, he touched his smartwatch and called his HQ. Rigatoni Ronnie picked up.
“Yes, Boss,” she said into her headset.
“Send all the troops to King Garlic’s castle in England via the Transporter! NOW!” Ron shouted.
“Yes, Boss. Will do, Boss.”
Ron turned to the minion walking beside him, took out his Knice Knife, and said “Finally. We will finish what Evil Eggplant started and we will rule the world!”
The minion giggled as he took out his Pasta Sauce Precision Squirter.
Back at the castle in the King’s and Queen’s throne room, a portal opened up and out walked Mushy and his crew.
King Garlic ran to him with open arms and said “I’m so glad you’re here! We fear a war might be heading here very soon!”
“Don’t worry, we will win. We have weapons and a new secret weapon: China Carrot!” Mushy told the King.
With a shock, King Garlic noticed China and gasped. “You’re alive?”
China smiled and said “Yes, and I will make sure my team wins.”
“But we have more pressing issues. Where’s Dishi?” Grape asked.
Queen Parmesan said that Sir Oregano should be here soon with him. Just then, there was a knock at the throne room door. It opened showing Oregano with a still unconscious Dishi. Beside him was another unknown man.
“Oregano! Finally! You have Dishi…Ah…who is that?” Garlic asked pointing to the man.
“This is Orzo. He said he came here to find Dishi to help fight against some food,” Oregano said.
Orzo held out his hand and said “I believe the Rigatoni Raiders are heading here and I wanted to use Dishi to fight against them.”
“Hmm. We feared the RR would come. Well, the more fighters the better!” Parmesan said.
A servant ran into the room breathless.
“Sir! The knights just saw Rigatoni Ron, Black Hearted Black Licorice, and Professor Burnt heading to the castle!” he said.
King Garlic looked distressed. “Ah, there’s so many enemies coming. I fear for my home.”
“Don’t worry. We will stop them and save your home,” Mushy said.
King Garlic ordered all Knights to assemble in front of the castle while Mushy and his friends, Orzo, and Oregano took the lead. Dishi laid in the cart on the side. He was still unconscious but they hoped he would awaken during the battle and help them. Black Licorice, Professor Burnt, Ron, and Ron’s minions rounded the hill, coming into view.
“Mushy Mushroom…I’ve been waiting for a long time to meet you,” BL said.
“Can’t say the same for you I’m afraid,” Mushy replied.
BL snarled. She turned to her army and shouted “KILL ALL OF THEM! SHOW NO MERCY!” Then she turned back, lifted her Licorice Lance, and charged.
Both armies ran toward each other, screaming. As they clashed, the sounds of swords and guns filled the air. Grape started fighting minions with her Grape Guns, blinding them with grape juice. Eavesman and his friends punched and kicked the Rigatonis until they were limp noodles. Dumpling clashed with Professor Burnt, who tried to shoot at Dumpling with a new Cooked to Perfection Ray Gun. Orzo with his trusty Boiling Water Squirter ran toward Ron who had a Freezer Air Gun. Bobby used his bamboo staff to swipe at any nearby enemies.
Meanwhile, Mushy and China ran toward BL. They stopped in front of her and Mushy asked his old friend if they should perform their signature moves. But when Mushy looked at China, he saw an evil look in his face.
“China? What’s wrong?” Mushy asked.
China just smiled and walked over to stand by BL. “Hi, Black Licorise. How’s it been?”
Mushy looked horrified. “You mean, you’re working for her! All this time?”
BL laughed. “No, not all this time. He was good. After EE shot him, you all presumed he was dead. And he was. But I found him and was able to revive him! I turned him into one of my followers. Everything that happened since the First Food Fight was all a part of my plan. Now China. Go wake up Dishi.”
China ran off to do BL’s bidding. Mushy stared at BL with a death glare. They stood there for a few seconds as the battle raged around them.
“I will kill you,” Mushy said, calling on his powers.
“You can try,” BL replied back, raising her Lance.
As Mushy and BL fought, China ran toward Dishi. The plan was to wake him up and have Dishi on their side to kill the enemies. But as he drew closer, Grape accidentally shot a stream of grape juice at Dishi waking him up. Then before China could say anything, Grape shouted “Dishi, fight the Rigatonis!”
The Dragon flew up into the sky, blowing a hot stream of fire.
“Oh shiitaki,” China said as he ran away from Dishi, back toward BL.
Dishi flew over the battlefield killing many Rigatonis with his fire breath. Eaveaman and his friends, Bobby, and Grape helped by making enemies stumble back into Dishi’s range. Dumpling drew closer to Burnt, knocked the Gun out of Burnt’s hands, and pushed him into Dishi’s fire, burning him to a crisp. Orzo and Ron shot at each other, the Boiling Water stream and Freezer Air stream hissing as they made contact in the air. Finally, Orzo was able to make a shot at Ron who collapsed screaming.
China continued running toward BL, who was fighting with Mushy. Both dodged each other’s attacks effortlessly. Suddenly Grape let out a painful yell, accidentally being hurt by Dishi’s fire. Mushy turned instinctively toward the sound, turning his back on BL. She smiled and raised her Lance and began charging at Mushy. But something blocked her Lance from hitting Mushy and the sudden force made her fall backward.
Mushy turned and saw China with the Lance sticking out of him. Even though China betrayed him, he still loved his friend and got furious. Mushy’s hands sparked with power as he unleashed a tidal Heat and Mold Wave. BL screamed as she got burned and rotted away. All the Rigatoni’s disintegrated into a pile of dust.
China laid on the ground coughing and bleeding. As the rest of the allies rushed over, Mushy knelt down next to China.
“Why did you do that?” Mushy asked.
“When I saw Black Licorise about to impale you, I suddenly remembered all our good times and I couldn’t let you die,” China said weakly. “I’m so sorry. I never wanted to hurt you. Please forgi–.”
China fell silent and limped in Mushy’s arms. “NO!” Mushy cried. “Hurry, use the Transporter and bring him to the medical bay back at HQ!”
Grape came next to Mushy and gently started to talk, but Mushy angrily cut her off. “I lost him once. I’m not gonna lose him again!” he said.
The battleground was silent as Grape took the Transporter from China’s belt and activated it. Dumpling carried China back through the portal. Mushy knelt down for a while longer, crying. Then he stood up and said he wanted to see China in the medbay.
As Grape was about to protest, BL and Ron started to stir. The Knights rushed over, made sure they couldn’t run, and walked them over to Mushy.
“You two caused a lot of trouble here. Fortunately, you lost. But you will spend an eternity in our holding cell,” Mushy told them.
“Lost? HAHA,” Ron laughed. “This is only the beginning.”
“We have many plans and backup plans to destroy foodkind and have only certain foods rule. And none of you here qualify,” BL said.
As the two villains were dragged away laughing, Mushy sighed.
“What do you think they mean?” Dumpling asked Mushy.
“I don’t know. But we will be ready.”
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What do you mean, “very bad”? This is awesome !
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Thanks! That makes me happy!
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Everyone loves an intense fight scene 
Nice to have villain defeats, too. Professor Burnt is now just a puddle of ashes and maple syrup. 
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Actually, I may start my own story/universe. You give great inspiration.
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Name:Ryan
Profession:Philanthropist
Affiliation:The dimensional defenders (all the playable characters in this game)
Abilities:Plasma gun and Plasma Blade, acrobatic skills, speed, nanite blood/regeneration
Demeanor:humorous, serious(sometimes),
Goal:to defend the Disney universe
Costume:Black Nanofiber Trenchcoat, Black Shoes, Black Mask
Enemies:Creeps
This is my persona in my personal imaginary headcanon
Name:the toonmaster
Alias:carl toony
Alignment:pure good
Teams:the toon squad
Powers:magic pencils and paint brushes, master of disguise,smart and sneaky
Weaknesses:no superpowers(like lazer eyes or super strength)
The toonmaster is a being who does not have any real superpowers…instead the power is in the paint as he can draw up any cartoon character to fight for him and is also a master of disguise as well as being extremely smart.
His team
Toonmasters toon squad mainy consists of superhero versions of familar disney characters
The tricky trio(aka “huey duey and louie”)
The tricky trio does not have superpowers neither but they mainly pull pranks in order to catch bad guys.
Sparkbolt(aka “sparky” from lilo and stitch)
Sparkbolt is able to conduct electricity in order to shock foes and shield himself from harm
Goldenhair(aka “rapunzel”)
The only female on the team, she uses her long golden hair to fight
Willie ole times(aka “classic mickey”)
The oldest member who can draw classic cartoon characters to fight for him
Thanks for adding Queen Parmesan and King Garlic!
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No problem! They helped find Dishi!
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Liking all these superhero ideas! You can make your own stories about your own heroes!
And I don’t know how long the break will be. Like I said I’m writing a book for fun and writing so many stuff gets busy! But I have a few ideas for Part 3!
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You know what? I’m giving this a try. I’m not gonna let you have all the fun
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