Qoute dad gum
Basic skill metar shooting his emeys with his dad gum
White skill mater grabbing rivals with his tow damaging and knocking back normal damage
Green skill mater disguies himself which will make it invisable for x seconds
Blue skill mater will shoot his dad gum causing normal damage
Purple skill every second time mater using green skill the emey s armor will decarese
Mater is control hero
Any suggetions for improvements? its my first copect be honest but gentel to me
I’m pretty burnt out to make a proper review but here we go. I’ll be checking with what you have only.
- You got this part, but I’m sure that there are some better quotes like:
“What’d you think? I just snuck in here when no one was looking and pretended to be your waiter just so I could hang out with you?”
- It’s “Enemies”, Emu(e)s are birds, and you don’t just shoot birds unless they’re the Stymphalian types of birds.
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- You seem to have edited it. Em(m)eys are awards.
- It’s called “Gatling Gun”. Mater calls for it using “Dadgum” because the computer misheard it.
- Please make up your mind. If you’re going to use Enemies, then stick to it.
- Pretty good Active.
- This could work but what good does it make if a disguised Hero is attacking in battle?
- See Basic Skill
- Also, no additional effects?
- How does disguising oneself decrease another’s Armor?
- Doesn’t seem to be like it. Although if you do want him to be a Control Hero, try to change some of his Skills so that it reflects his Role.
- See Mater is a Control Hero
- Pretty good for your first concept, but some practice will be needed. Some people say things bluntly l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶m̶e but in some cases, it will benefit you in the long run.
Do you think chance of avafing attacks will be batter ? Since disguie helping blending in the evirmont i done mistake i wamted to type the blue skil will decrease armor in the second time its used will these changes will improve my conpect? i a not sure about basic skill yet
The Disguise part could stay, but instead of making him invisible, it should increase his Evasion.
As for the Basic Skill, it’s fine.
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Will blue skill be improved by lowering armor ? So it will make it batter as control hero i thought about batter idea for purple every second time the green skill is used mater s evading chance will increase
I mean, the Blue Skill can become better if you add an additional effect. Mater’s a Control Hero, so why not add a CC like Stun or Silence?
As for the Purple Skill, I think that’s good.