Mulan and Mushu

[R_a_v_e_n]

Alright so last time I posted I messed up but this time I understand and I want to share this. (Remember this is my first time and I have no idea what I’m doing)

2** Damage, Mid-line
Team: Yellow
Quote: Ah I see you have a sword, I have one too, they’re very manly and tough.
Enter: Rides in on Khan then jumps off
Victory: Punches the sky in happiness?
Defeat: Drops sword

White Skill: Look Out! Mulan fires a cannon at the nearest support hero doing x damage
Green Skill: Dishonor on you. Mushu jumps forward and slaps an enemy dealing x damage
Blue Skill: Reflection. Mulan gives x HP to the nearest ally
Purple Skill: The Great Mushu. Mushu has flames erupt on all the enemy dealing x damage

Well that’s all for today, thanks for reading

[HeroSSWin]

• White Skill: A target-specific Skill… what if there are no Support Heroes on the opposing team?

• Green Skill: A standard Damaging Skill, although I expected a secondary Effect like a Stun or Silence.

• Blue Skill: Again, a target-specific Skill. This could backfire if, let’s say, the nearest Target has Full HP and there are others who need the Heal.

• Purple Skill: Purple Skills are usually Passive… but good Skill nonetheless.

[Champion_David]

Certainly not bad for a first concept

Your spelling and grammar are good, and the skillset itself, while weak, is certainly decent.

You even nailed the X variable thing, which sometimes takes a while to get, so well done!

Advice: Mulan’s cannon skill is good, however what would she target if there were no support heroes?? In addition, it could be nice if it had another effect.

Green skill is fine as is.

Blue skill could you tell me what you meant by Gives? Does she give her own HP, or is it a heal, or is she increasing their max HP??

Now, the purple skill is where things get a little more difficult, you see, with only a few exceptions, Purple skills are passive abilities. Thus the Mushu one will not work very well. Unless, perhaps it had a condition like being used once per battle or being used when an enemy drops below 50% HP, or something like that.

But, good job for a first concept.

[R_a_v_e_n]

@HeroSSWin and @Champion_David, thank you for the review, I thought I’d just give it a shot.

[R_a_v_e_n]

You see, I’m a level 82, and i still don’t understand half the game, skills, friendships, and other things like that, so I’m terribly sorry

[Frater123]

You have nothing to be sorry about. This is great for a first concept.

[HeroSSWin]

Your In-game Level doesn’t have anything to do with making Concepts… unless you’re making very detailed Concepts like Vizier’s or Filadae’s…

Plus, as far as I know, this is your First Concept, which is always a good First Step when making Concepts here in the Forums…

[R_a_v_e_n]

I have just realized i forgot friendships

[Chief_Lionheart_XLI]

Not a bad concept

[Pipsqueak]

Try using markdown to style your concept, it can help make it look more attractive & readable.

like this!

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Quick tutorial here:
https://commonmark.org/help/tutorial/

[R_a_v_e_n]

Thanks for the suggestion