Phineas and Ferb (Likely)

[theninja12_II]

PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK, FIRST TIME MAKING A CONCEPT IN A FEW YEARS

Description: the mischevious master-builders are back at it again! What will they build this time to help fight the creeps?

Quote: Hey Ferb! I know what we’re going to do
today!”

Animations

Entrance: Phineas and Ferb walk in playing their Title Sequence

Victory: Phineas and Ferb raise their fists with joy

Defeat: Candace brings their mom onto the battlefield and busts them, then they disappear.

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Basic information

Trial team: red

Position: back

Role: Support (or probably control, I really don’t know which one to put right here. Help please lol)

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Attacks and skills

Basic attack: Phineas and Ferb make a random small contraption, each doing one of three things. (Critics and commenters, help me on what these will be) Contraption 1: Increases the attack speed of all allies by 100% for 4 seconds. Contraption 2: Heals the ally with the lowest current hp for x health. Contraption 3: Causes the closest enemy to become “In Awe” for 3 seconds.

Enemies that are “In Awe” have there movement speed, attack speed, and attack damage reduced by 50% for the duration of the debuff.

White Skill: Roller Coaster normal damage
Normal damage
Passive: explains basic attack
Active: Phineas and Ferb build a roller coaster, causing all enemies to be “In Awe” for 10 seconds. They then ride the roller coaster through enemies, dealing x damage and knocking them back.

“In Awe” has a chance to fail if the enemies are above level x.

Green Skill: New Discoveries

Phineas and Ferb discover something new, causing the closest 3 enemies to become “In Awe” for 6 seconds, and Inspiring all allies for 6 seconds

The Inspire and “In Awe” have a chance to fail if the allies and enemies are above level x.

Blue skill: quick fix

Phineas and Ferb repair the equipement of the ally with the least hp, healing them for x hp, increasing their attack speed by 100% for 6 seconds, and and giving them 300 energy.

Purple skill: Time Machine

Once per battle, when Phineas and Ferb reach 0 hp, they jump into their time machine and disappear. They reappear 3 seconds later with 50% of their max hp. They cause all enemies to become “In Awe” for 13 seconds, and lose x armor and evasion for 13 seconds.

“In Awe” from this skill cannot be blocked, reflected, or disabled.

Red skill: Master Builders
“In Awe” from every move now stuns for 6 seconds when it reaches the end of its duration.

All allies are Inspired for 4 seconds with every basic attack.

Phineas and Ferb also heal for x hp over 4 seconds when they return from “Time Machine”.

Additional stat boosts:

+x max hp
+x skill power
+x damage to “Roller Coaster”

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Friendships:
Phineas and Ferb/Perry the Platypus
Secret Agent Pet
Campaign: Phineas and Ferb finally reunite with their pet platypus, but he seems to be pretty busy with fighting the creeps.
Campaign allies: Doofenshmirtz, Sally, and Gizmoduck
Disk appearance: Perry’s fedora
Disk effect: every 6 basic attacks do all 3 effects from each version.
Each star takes off a basic attack
Disk buffs:
x max hp to all allies
x skill power
x basic damage to all allies

Phineas and Ferb/Megavolt
Inventors
Campaign: Phineas and Ferb find another inventor, but something seems off about him.
Allies: Kermit, Wall-E, Dr. Drakken
Disk effect: “Quick Fix” now heals x hp, increases the attack speed by 100% for 6 seconds, and gives 300 energy to all allies.
Each star adds one second to the attack speed buff

[theninja12_II]

Please tell me if I missed anything! And make sure to give feedback

[JimiestOfJams]

From both a technical and creative perspective this is an excellent first concept! Since it’s your first concept I’ll be a little nitpicky but this is overall very good work!

• The format is great but learn how to use asterisks to bold and italicize text or to make lists; it’ll really help break up big chunks of text (emojis, pictures, or gifs also achieve similar effect, but they’re not necessary).

• The basic attack/passive skill is quite complex; while there’s no rule that it can’t be, I would generally recommend keeping the basic attack more basic than the skills.

• I’m happy to see that every skill includes a variable, although the Blue and Purple skills don’t necessarily need a level cap since they already have another variable.

• The Red skill could use another main effect; I typically do three main points (or less if they’re big effects) and then three additional stat buffs (the one main point you have could honestly be split into two).

• The star upgrade on campaign disks should have one consistent effect; the disk with Perry is good because it changes from 6 to 5 to 4 to 3 to 2 basic attacks, but the Megavolt disk should change either how many allies are affected OR the buff length.

[theninja12_II]

Thank you! I will make some changes.

[theninja12_II]

Btw it isn’t my first concept entirely, just the first one in a long time. I also made concepts for Arthur (the virus from Wreck-it Ralph 2), King Candy, and Fred
Fredrickson (who has some similarities in-game to my concept).

[Commander_oswald_1927]

Um there death emote doesn’t make sense because in show there inventions go really well so I don’t think there machine blows up makes sense

[theninja12_II]

What would you recommend?

[Jack_Skellington_IV]

For their death animation, I would have Candace bring Mom and bust them, then they get sad and disappear. Also for their entrance animation, they should go in on the rollercoaster.

[theninja12_II]

Good idea for death animation, but since the roller coaster is already being used for a different animation I don’t think that would work, sorry.