I want you will note i am doing this conpect again since i tried to improve it but no one noticed so not flagging the contest again please do not flagg the contest
Randal bogs is monster who using his invisabilty and scareing skills to help the team
Team trial color yellow
Qoute do you hear that? Its the wind off the change
White skill randal and 1 alley turning invisable for 8 seconds
Green skill randal will sneak and scare enemies dealing fantastic damage the scare lasts for 9 srconds
Blue randal will heal and give energy for himself and his allies gor 10 seconds
Purple skill randal and his allies s damage will will be stronger on scared enemies
Red skill ramdal and his allies getting energy from scared enemies
Friends jack skellington and mike wazowski
In randal s jack skellington frienship randal disvovered monsters inc is not working child scearming but on laugh so jack skellington offering to help him with halloween
Randal s jack skellington disc will increase damage from green skill and will increase the insivabilty from white skill and scareing from green skill by 2 seconds per star
In randal mike wazowski friendship campigan mike and randal deciding to stop the rivaly and be friends again and mike tells randal that scareing can not only give energy but healing as well the mike disc will lower enemies s reailty and will increase healing and energy given by 10 precents per star the effcts off the blue skill s time off effcts will be longer by 2 seconds per star
Enternce aniamtion randal will be seen sneaking out off door
Deafeat aniamtion randal will be thrown into active door like in the end off monsters inc
Victory animation randal will become invisable and will disapear from the area
Anyway feedback will be good if you think the conpect needs improvements like i stated do not flag the post
Aside from the difficulty of reading this concept, it is …okay.
to improve, put more enters, and dpuble check more spellling. 
fixed few misspelling i had in texts made bigger space and added animtions since i forgot to add this earlier is it easeier to read?
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I like it
Good job