Star Wars Concepts: Obi-Wan Kenobi and Count Dooku

Due to a tie in the vote I’ve decided to do both in one concept.

Disclaimer: Some skills inspired by Star Wars Battlefront II

Obi-Wan Kenobi

Stars: :star2::star2:
Quote: “You’ll Never Find A More Wretched Hive Of Scum and Villainy”
Position: Frontline
Role: Support
Team: Blue
Entrance: Obi-Wan drops down from the top of the screen and ignites his saber
Defeat: Obi-Wan is sweeped off his feet and he drops his lightsaber.
Basic Attack: Obi-Wan swings his lightsaber gracefully.

White Skill: Mind Trick
:infinity: - Passive Skill
Obi-Wan uses the force to Mind Trick the opposing team, charming the enemy with the highest skill power for 13 seconds and stunning every other enemy for 5 seconds. All the damage dealt by the charmed enemy is distributed equally as health to the ally with the lowest health, the ally with the lowest energy and Obi-Wan himself.
The charm and stun have a chance to fail against enemies higher than level X

Green Skill: All Out Push.
:sparkle: - Fantastic Damage
Obi Wan uses the force to push back the closest enemy, dealing X damage and decreasing their armor by X for 10 seconds.

Blue Skill: Defensive Rush
:eight_pointed_black_star: - Normal Damage
Obi-Wan rushes across the battlefield, absorbing any buffs up to a maximum of 5 and dealing X damage to each enemy. When Obi-Wan returns to his original position, all the buffs he absorbed are distributed randomly to allies.

Purple Skill: The Strongest Defense
:infinity: - Passive Skill
Obi-Wan studies all enemies that attack him during Defensive Rush for 17 seconds.
This has a chance to fail against enemies higher than level X

Red Skill: General Kenobi
:infinity: - Passive Skill
Obi-Wan’s Armor and Reality cannot be lowered
Obi-Wan grants allies +X maximum health
This has a chance to fail against enemies higher than level X
Stat boosts

Friendships:
Obi-Wan and Basil Of Baker Street

“Consise Consistancy”

Studied enemies take +25% extra damage from crits for each star.
+X Basic Damage

Obi-Wan and Yoda

“Master’s Gift”

Mind Trick’s health regain is increased by 30% for each star
+X Reality

Count Dooku

Stars: :star2::star2:
Quote: “The Sith Are All Powerful!”
Position: Frontline
Role: Damage
Team: Blue
Entrance: Dooku walks up, twirls his saber and ignites it.
Defeat: Dooku drops to his knees and drops his saber.
Basic Attack: Dooku swings his lightsaber twice up and down.

White Skill: Duelist
:infinity: - Passive Skill
Dooku switches to a more offensive lightsaber stance until he runs out of energy, gaining 200% attack speed and 100% basic damage and skill power, but losing 50% armor and reality.
The damage boost has a chance to fail against enemies higher than level X

Green Skill: Lightning Bolt
:sparkle: - Fantastic Damage
Dooku shoots out his force lightning, applying two stacks of Charged to each enemy and dealing X damage.

Blue Skill: Expose Weakness
:infinity: - Passive Skill
At the start of each wave, Dooku marks an enemy. That enemy takes 100% extra damage from all sources and their movement speed is slowed by 75%.
The extra damage has a chance to fail against an enemy above level X

Purple Skill: Master Duelist
:infinity: - Passive Skill
Whenever an enemy is debuffed, Dooku gains +100 energy.
The stamina is reduced against enemies higher than level X

Red Skill: Balanced Duelist
:infinity: - Passive Skill
When Count Dooku activates Duelist, all stacks of Charged are consumed on enemies, lowering their armor by X per stack of Charged for 8 seconds.
Stat Boosts

Friendships:
Count Dooku and Maleficent

“All Powerful”

Basic Attacks deal fantastic damage
+5% crit chance per star
+X basic damage
Allies - Peter Pan, The Mad Hatter, Sulley and Boo

Count Dooku and Anakin Skywalker

“Head’s Up!”

Expose Weakness deals 5% (per star) of the marked enemies health over 5 seconds
+skill power
Allies - Olaf, Scrooge McDuck, Mushu

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This makes no sense when there’s no context.

The charm is fine but the stun is way too OP.

Does he absorb the enemies’ debuffs? If so that is basically an enemy support skill.

So not even buffed? You really need to rethink your wording.

Did you just copy-paste mine?

Yep, it would seem so.

What exactly is stamina?


Seperate out the friendships so it’s not just one big lump.

Overall I’d give this a 4/10.

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I have noticed it is very similar to yours @Slinky-Dog, but these have a more rushed quality to them. They are pretty good but could be a lot better. Keep working at it @JokersWild and maybe take a break and view some strong concepts and see what you can do to improve. Looking at other’s concepts is a way to learn.

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Yeah, I made this at two in the morning and since it was two at once I tried to finish them quickly. In the future I’ll make sure to review the concepts thoroughly.

I’ve taken in your criticism and made changes where necessary, except Duelist, because that’s a really hard skill to change in this context.

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