“What Beastly Luck!” (3rd Concept) SHERE KHAN

Creative Corner Hero Concepts
#1

Uh oh! It’s a t-t-t-tiger! Beware for, shere Khan wants to hunt down Mowgli and his friends! But, a concept about him won’t hurt… Right?

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Quote: “I can’t help but notice, that there’s this strange odor today!”
Stars: :star2:
Position: Middle
Blue :large_blue_circle:
Team: Support
BIO: Oh no! It’s shere Khan! Beware for this Big Tiger is up to no good! His a villain luckily, his gonna help the city!

ANIMATION
Entrance: Shere Khan walks in with a snarl
Defeat: Shere Khan Sits and Turns his head away
Victory: Shere Khan Roars with excitement

SKILLS

White Skill :white_circle:

CLAW SWIPE!
Shere Khan Snarls, he puts his paw out, and the claws come reaching out, then a huge Swipe comes in. Shere Khan swipes and scratches the Enemy, leaving 5%-7% of their health! The enemy can also be stun, if lucky!

Green Skill :green_circle:

VULTURES, ASSEMBLE!
Shere Khan yells at the vultures, a whole swam of Vultures come flying! Attacking the Enemies at full Speed! 9%-11% of health goes down! The Vultures can also heal a teammate who’s in need of rescuing! Shere Khan’s Vultures fly out of Sight!

Blue Skill :large_blue_circle:

I’M THE TIGER!!
Shere Khan roars loudly, the enemies ears burst! Making it really hard to see and to hear! 29%-49% of health goes down! Or 4%-2% sometimes! Shere Khan reminds the enemies that his the tiger, you don’t wanna mess with! Max HP isn’t a good idea, because it crashes the game sometimes. But sometimes it’s a good idea!

Purple Skill :purple_circle:

ALL HAIL THE SHERE KHAN!!
Shere Khan jumps on an enemy attacking them, after that the Vultures, Wolves and Him, work together! 50%- 100% is taken down! Shere Khan, Roars like his about to Pounce! Shere Khan pounces on an enemy!

Red Skill :red_circle:

POUNCIN’ AND JUMPIN’ TIME, TIGERS!!!
Shere Khan starts getting ready to pounce, and then he pounces, he jumps and Pounces on an enemy one by one, all the health goes down, but sometimes it doesn’t go down! Shere Khan gets over excited and “Accidentally” Pounces and Scratches the nearby enemy!

FRIENDSHIPS
Scar
Cheshire Cat

BE PREPARED, FOR THE EVIL CATS
Scar and Shere Khan are best friends! They start hanging out and start fighting Creeps! Nothing can get between these two friends!

DIALOGUE
Scar: It’s been a long time Shere Khan
Shere Khan: Yes it has! Now let’s keep battling creeps!
Scar: Yes definitely! We both are evil cats anyways!
Shere Khan: We were meant to be! Am I right Scar?
Scar: Alright let’s just do it!
Shere Khan: Ok!

TWO CHESIRE CATS TWO VILLAINS!
Chesire Cat and Shere Khan both work together to create the bestest, Best friend, Power! They work together defeating Creeps!

DIALOGUE
Chesire Cat: The Creeps are that way, no this way, no over there
Shere Khan: Where?
Chesire Cat: I confuse People, that’s way I’m a villain!
Shere Khan: I KNOW!! ROAR!!!
Chesire Cat: Whatever!
Shere Khan: Let’s defeat Creeps! Come on!
Chesire Cat: Fine!

NEW HEROES
Shere Khan will be in the diamond Crate!

CHIPS
80 chips needed

Shere Khan is a Support hero on the Red team!

Fun Fact: Chesire Cat is known to be a Villain, for confusing people, and luring them to a dangerous place (what I think)

Thanks for reading this concept! Bye!

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#2

Dude seriously. What’s your game? We all know who you are. You will just get removed again so what’s the point?

#3

Stop, plz it’s not. Plz, ok? It’s not, that guy didn’t do Concepts that good, like I do

#4

You are the same person. You have the same artstyle , same broken sentence structure , same nonsensical rambling and you both are obsessed with cats. Get real you aren’t fooling anyone.

#5

… uh, I’m not the only here who loves cat, and, this took me 1+ hour

#6

Uh, I think The Jungle Book character’s team is Blue.

#7

Wdym? What do you mean?

#8

Hmm I thought he appears with Princess Jasmine during gameplay

#9

All characters from the same franchise are on the same Trial Team. Since all of the Jungle Book characters are on the Blue Team, Shere Khan would be as well.

That’s Rajah, not Shere Khan…

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#10

Look at the Trials in the game and see what I’m talking about.

#11

Okay, sorry

#12

oh ahahahah sorry I’ve mistaken

#13

This concept is pretty neat! But I do have some feedback.

  1. Descriptions can be a little bit unspecific, for instance:

What makes a teammate who’s in need of rescuing, need rescuing? Do they need rescuing because they are below X% Health? or do they need rescuing because they have multiple active debuffs?

  1. Its description is very messy and very hard to read and understand. When making a skillset for a hero, its grammar must be somewhat similar to the game’s grammar. Like I said before try using Grammarly to make sentences easy to write and understand.

  2. Shere Khan sounds more like a damaged unit than a support unit. Most of his skill sets often damage enemy units other than supporting his team. This is your opportunity to explore buffs and debuffs that can be applied to units in battle.

  3. Instead of the damaged system being a percentage try using the "X’ symbol, which symbolizes a number. Skills don’t also mention what type of damage is being applied, is it dealing with Normal Damage or Fantastic or True Damage?

  4. When making a hero concept, make sure it is balanced.

I assume these skills damage an enemy by 50% - 100% as Health Percentage. This needs a lot of balancing especially since Shere Khan is a support unit.

  1. There isn’t a passive. It is just skills. Heroes always at least have a passive in their skill sets. Passives are usually found in White, Purple, and Red Skills.

Overall I think this concept is decent it just needs a lot of improvement. You can always look at guides to learn more and look at other concepts for inspiration! Try to use more HTML elements like the br tag or the italic tag to make the description more friendly to readers.
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#14

Not all Concepts are perfect! Sooner or later your Concepts will be great and will be enjoyed by a lot of readers and players. I believe in you in your journey of concept-making, Im sure you will do great!

#15

Awww Nice pep talk!

#16

  1. If you are who I think you are, Didn’t you already make a Shere Khan concept?

  2. If you are who I think you are, weren’t you suspended? Violating your suspension is not a good idea. Trust me, we have someone doing that already.

  3. If you are who I think you are, what happen coming back when you are older?

#17

… stop enough, I’m not, OK? I’m just only in my 20s, OK??

#18

Oh, so now it’s 20s? Last time you said you were 13 and then admitted to being to being 12. We’re on to you Leo Lion, so you might as well confess.

#19

I’m not!! Plz! I’m not :cry:, I’m getting sick of it!

#20

Why, why do you think I’M Leo?

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