Ya”Goob”ian

The Bowler Hat Guy/Goob & Doris are a
:star::star:Control Hero
Quote:”Prepare to be Amazed!”
Position: Backline
Team color: Blue
Defeat: Doris explodes and Goob cries and pouts
Victory: Doris and Goob get excited
Entrance: Bowler Hat Guy walks in creepily then Doris lands on his head

Skills
Basic Attack: Doris goes over to a enemy Anti charming their enemies into attacking them for 2 seconds

White skill “Dor-15”: Doris goes to a enemy and takes complete control over them for 7 seconds (The Attack damage dealt to this enemy is multiplied by X)

Green Skill “The Checklist”: Bowler Hat Guy whips out his Journal and writes in a checklist then Doris completes his checklist (Checklist is to Go Shock a enemy stunning them for 6 seconds then to go scare 2 enemies for 7 seconds)

Blue skill “Mini Doris”: Doris gives The Bowler Hat Guy a mini Doris to find good targets in the battle this increases The Bowler Hat Guy’s Attack speed by 60%

Purple skill “The Game”: every time a enemy is stunned by “The Checklist” The Bowler Hat Guy’s Armor And Reality are increased by X

Red skill “Steal an invention”: Every enemy that is scared from “The Checklist” Reality decreases by X for 6 seconds
Chance to fail on enemies above level Y

Friendships
Goob-Gaston “Hatred Of evolution ”: “Mini Doris” now increases the teams Attack speed by 30% (Add 10 per star Max is 80%) it also increases the amount The Bowler Hat Guy gets by 40% (again per star max being 90%)

Coming soon:???

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I haven’t done this in a looooooong time


SIN COUNTER’S BACK!


  • Doris (+1)
  • When Goob wins, he is “exited” (+1)
  • Basic attack isn’t descriptive enough (+1)
  • “Anti-Charm” lasts, apparently, forever (+3)
  • Active’s description doesn’t have the word “charm” in it (+1)
  • No new mechanic, since DOR-15 is needed to fight but they are instead on the head of an enemy so… (+1)
  • “Stunning then” (+1)
  • A 2-second stun is very weak, especially when the skill won’t be used very often (+1)
  • Scare length is too small (+1)
  • DOR-15 only scared 1 enemy (+1)
  • How do you “scoop out” enemies? Take them away from the battlefield? Too OP (+5)
  • Attack speeds don’t increase by numbers, but by percentages (+1)
  • Red Skill has now variable (+1)
  • 4 da gramer miss taks (+1)
  • One friendship (+1)
  • Although both are dumb academically, they did choices smart enough to torment the protagonist (+1)
  • “Dumb” is really just an opinion. So… bad disk name (+1)
  • What the? 1310! As in 1310%?! Heck no! You would only see a blur (+9)
  • Also attack speed increases by a percentage, not variable (+1)
  • That attack speed increase is insane! (+10)

Sins: 43


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Goob is holding a piece of Gaston…

Why does Doris get a sin…?

Because it is actually DOR-15 (didn’t you read how I mentioned them?)

I’m pretty sure I corrected half those sins
Also what does
“red skill has now valuable”
Mean?

Search up the word variable

Ok let’s see
All the Attack speed sins I have corrected
The disk name is done
The Scooping thing is done
The “Stunning then” Corrected
Anti Charm has the Amount now
Exited is now excited
The stunning amount has been increased
Scaring more enemies check
Also there are lots of heroes with 1 friendship that just came out
Example: Huey Dewey And Louie have only 1 friendship

I am pretty sure Goob uses tech to win? DOR-15, the time machine, Lewis’s invention…

But one friendship will come soon

Let’s see those who had one friendship when they were released

  • Stitch
  • Jack Skellington
  • Hades
  • Scar
  • Zurg
  • Flynn
  • Animal
  • etc.

So why don’t you do sin counters for concepts that are 100% terrible ?

I have been busy with school

Also, isn’t your concept terrible? Just sayin’

It’s not 100% terrible

Like that Forky Concept that came out the same time as mine

It isn’t 100% terrible… but it is terrible

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No Concept is perfect

But yours is honestly far from it

I see more effort was put into this and I do applaud you for that. Still a few things:
Armor and reality should be displayed by X, as this amount should increase as the skill levels.

Attack speed is a percentage and percentages will never be a variable.

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I just corrected those errors

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