Bing Bong (My First Hero Concept)

[Miraculous_Lance]

I don’t know if people already did a concept of Bing Bong but I’ll just assume mine is different.

Profile

Name: Bing Bong
Movie: Inside Out
Stars:
Description: Bing Bong is ready to show his enemies the power of imagination.
Quote: “Welcome to Imagination Land!”
Position: Middle
Role: Damage
Trial Team: Yellow
Collections: Damage, Stun, Healers

Animations

Basic Attack/Passive: Bing Bong throws a memory orb to an enemy.
Entrance: Bing Bong gets off the Train of Thought.
Victory: Bing Bong jumps happily and gets all excited.
Defeat: Bing Bong fades away just like we saw in the movie.

Skills

Imaginary Bag

( NORMAL DAMAGE)

Bing Bong throws a stack of memory orbs, dealing X damage to enemies.

Flying Rocket

( FANTASTIC DAMAGE)

Bing Bong rides his rocket and go through enemies, dealing X damage and stunning the 2 closest enemies for 10 seconds.

French Fry Forest

Bing Bong eats his french fries and gives some to his allies, healing him and his allies with Z HP.

Being Imaginative

When Bing Bong uses “French Fry Forest”, the ally with the least HP becomes Invincible for 8 seconds.
The invincibility has a chance to fail for allies above level Y.

Your Imaginary Friend

When Bing Bong uses “Flying Rocket”, enemies who are hit with his rocket are slowed down for 12 seconds and their skill power is decreased by 50% in the entire duration of the debuff. Bing Bong also gains Z HP for himself when the slow duration is over.

Extra Stats:
+X basic damage
+W skill power
+X damage to “Flying Rocket”

Friendships

Bing Bong/Mad Hatter

Campaign: Dreaming Reality
Description: Bing Bong and Mad Hatter went to find out if everything they see is real or just an imagination.
Allies: Mickey Mouse, Hades, and Ian Lightfoot
Disk: Memory Accuracy
Effects: When Bing Bong’s Purple skill is activated, the skill duration is increased by +1 second/s (+1 second per star).
+Y Energy Regen

Bing Bong/Anger

Campaign: Just Think Happy Thoughts
Description: Bing Bong helps Anger to make him think happy thoughts to calm him down.
Allies: Alice, Kristoff, and Pooh
Disk: Smile Mask
Effects: Each time an ally in Bing Bong’s team gets K’O-ed, the attack speed of allies are increased by +20% for 20 seconds (+20% per star).
+Y Skill Power

[Myeong]

I like this concept! There’s a few things I’d like to say about it, if I may:

Bing Bong throws 5-10 memory orbs, dealing X damage to enemies. The amount of damage dealt is decrease against enemies who are above level Y.

It might be better to just make Bing Bong throw one set amount of orbs each time instead of making it random between 5 & 10, if only so the skill is more consistent. Also, if this skill is just pure damage, then it doesn’t need a “This has a chance to fail against enemies above level X.” on it.

Bing Bong rides his rocket and go through enemies, dealing X damage and stunning the closest enemies for 10 seconds.

What type of damage does this do (Normal, Fantastic, TRUE)? Also, a 10-second stun on multiple enemies seems a little too strong. I might decrease the duration of the stun a little.

Bing Bong eats his french fries and gives some to his allies, healing him and his allies with Z HP.

The amount of HP recieved by allies is decreased for allies above level Y.

Again, if the skill is just pure healing, then it doesn’t need a “This has a chance to fail…” on it. (Usually, that is only added to a skill if the skill only debuffs/buffs in some way.)

When Bing Bong uses his Blue skill, the ally with the least HP becomes Invincible for 8 seconds.

THIS is a skill that would need the “This has a chance to fail…” clause on it.

When Bing Bong uses his Green skill, enemies who are hit with his rocket are slowed down for 12 seconds

Is this an attack speed or a movement speed slow? Or both?

+X basic damage
+W skill power

You need to add one more stat boost here.

Each time an ally in Bing Bong’s team gets K’O-ed, the attack speed of allies are increased by +Y for 20 seconds.

I assume the variable is meant to be a percentage?

If you want a little more help, you should take a look at @Imagineer_V’s concept making guide: A Guide to Making Character Concepts

But I like what you have so far!

[Miraculous_Lance]

Skill is just pure damage

Okay then. I’ll keep that in mind for my next concepts.

What type of damage does this do

It’s actually just normal damage with a debuff added to it. I just assume that maybe people who sees that consider that damage as normal since I haven’t though of putting what kind of damage it is.

A 10-second stun on multiple enemies seems a little too strong

What I mean by multiple enemies is that he hits at least 1 or 2 enemies. I accept the mistake I did there about the duration of the time. I’ll keep that in mind.

The skill is just pure healing

Okay then. I’ll change that next time.

THIS is a skill that would need the “This has a chance to fail…” clause on it.

I forgot to add that clause. Sorry for the misunderstanding.[quote=“Myeong, post:2, topic:1450645”]
Is this an attack speed or a movement speed slow?
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It’s more stating on the slowness of the movement speed.[quote=“Myeong, post:2, topic:1450645”]
You need to add one more stat boost here.

Miraculous_Lance:
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Okay. Three is the best number of boosts for a red skill.

I assume the variable is meant to be a percentage?

I didn’t really had it in mind in putting percentage. I’m sorry.

Anyways, thank you for correcting me. I appreciate it.

[Myeong]

Of course! You’ve got a very good foundation for a concept here that just needs a little fine tuning to make it more balanced and accurate to the game. Great job!