This should be “got it in”
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The top box in Calhoun and Violet’s conversation is messed up. I believe Violet is suppose to be saying that and not Calhoun.
There should be a space between “yell” and “and.”
I believe the word “be” should come after “always.”
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It also needs an “a” between for and good. 
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Either that, or tack on an “s” to the end of “number.”
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I think there should be two?
The one before is following the rule of the first word being unrelated to the sentence, like “Yes, No, Well, etc”
While the second would be in place for the noun of direct address.
I think??
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Yeah maybe, I think it reads better with just 1 or the sentence is a bit broken up, but it’s probably more correct with 2
canon in this context should be cannon
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Shouldn’t it be “fire cannon” though?
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The first one is correct. Look at the way the sentence is written. “Quorra and he.” if it were to be “proposes” then it should say “he and Quorra”
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“cannon fire” is used in the same way as eg. “gunfire”, ie, the firing of the cannon. Not a cannon that shoots 
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First off, it doesn’t matter what order the compound subject is in if they are connected with “and.” Either way, the verb must be plural. Second, even if there was an “or” between “he” and “Quorra,” it wouldn’t matter because “he and Quorra” are in a different clause (that he and Quorra start a book club). “He proposes” is in a clause of its own. Because they are in their own separate clauses, the subject/verb agreement rules don’t apply to them.
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You have it backwards 
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Cannon fire would be the shot from the cannon E.G, the Cannon ball.
A fire cannon…would be a cannon that shoots fireballs, which while cool, isn’t quite what they are saying I think…
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Hades should have an apostrophe after the “s”
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The wording for Scrooge doesn’t make sense. It should be, for example - “Scrooge will have his combat strength increased”, or “Scrooge and friends will have their combat strength increased”.
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“We Are Scrooge We Will Have Our Combat Strength Increased”
I see no problems here.
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The Merlin/Genie campaign seems to have several typos in it.
Video games is composed of two separate words. Not one.
“Transform” should be singular.
“Wizards’ duel” is written differently in three different places. I’m pretty sure the on I used in the previous sentence is the correct one.
I think Quorra’s and Buzz’s dialogue has been switched up. Except for the last thing Buzz says. That seems accurate.
I think there should be a comma after “sword.”
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