We don’t do that here.
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If you’re referring to the characters saying the wrong thing, we also post those here.
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I know xD it’s just insane to see animal talking fluently even if it was an error
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I think “Incredible” is possibly correc t.
If you change the pronunciation of the word, you get In-cred-i-beel.
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No, the proper name of his car is spelled as ‘Incredibile’.
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Yeah that’s a tough one. It sort of sounds right either way but I think ‘pole vaulting’ as a noun makes far more sense than as a verb which would warrant the possessive case.
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I’ve got a few to report today.
That “a” before “archery” should be “an.”
The first sentence in the top speech box doesn’t really make sense with that comma there. I think it would flow much better without it.
That comma in the last sentence should be a period.
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I think that one is right?
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Two independent clauses can’t be separated by a comma. Doing so makes it a run-on sentence. It could be resolved without creating two sentences by making one of the clauses subordinate to the other. A way to do this would be putting a conjunction such as “so” after the comma.
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It was the other one
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I think a semicolon would sound best. But since it’s dialogue, I think they can get away with it.
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Yes, a semicolon would also work. I thought about mentioning it, but didn’t. I also considered that they could reasonably use the run-on sentence to imply quick speech.
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Also, maybe “this is THE most impressive…”?
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No, by saying “a most impressive” she just means very impressive.
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What does it mean by “steal 10%“? What does it steal? Armor? Memes? The chance of Kim coming to the game?
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A few things here -
“day” is obviously repeated, only 1 “day” is needed.
“the best. Day. Ever” - the periods are clearly used for emphasis, which is fine - but the capitalisation, while technically correct, looks wrong. It could use title case - ie. “the Best. Day. Ever” - I think that makes more sense.
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