“They’re” should be “Their.”
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On all of the subway backgrounds where the newsstand is shown: “stationary” is shown as a newsstand product. Paper for letter and note writing is “stationery” spelled with an e as in “envelope.”
“Stationary” refers to something that does not move or stays in the space it is located in.
The wrong form of the word is used in that background.
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All in the same chapter…
There should be a comma after Enraged.
“But” at the beginning of a sentence like this is poor structure.
The comma should be a semicolon or something else to break up the sentence.
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I think this sounds okay when spoken, but I really tripped over myself the first seven times I read it, so I don’t know… Maybe it is just me 
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Well “more better” is a grammatical error I think
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That was what I was talking about, I could say it out loud and it sounds alright, I guess but it really bothers me typed out.
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Actually to not is proper grammar while not to is modern
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Nope 
. When using an infinitive e.g. to use, to do, etc. placing a word between the ‘to’ and the verb is an error, it’s called splitting the infinitive.
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To be or not to be
Its used in theater and poetry
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You said I was wrong and now you have evidence backing up my point. Which side are you on?
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I think either way is accurate?
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As far as I know the right one is “not to”
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It is, because of why @Fellow_Piglet said. It’s quite a formal rule though, so the wrong version is commonly seen - it’s not a ‘glaring’ error
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Although technically speaking ”to not ” is not correct it’s a split infinitive—it’s perfectly acceptable in ordinary usage in writing. It depends on the context, rhythm and style of the sentence. Generally speaking, “ not to” is used more in colloquial English.
I am not saying not to is wrong but to not is acceptable
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If the “an” is going to be there, then “souls” should be singular.
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A couple errors from the Flynn/Rapunzel Campaign
Should be “Much to her dismay”.
His name is spelled Pascal.
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What the heck. Pasqual??
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She hits herself with the pan too many times…
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