Grammatical Error Found

Shouldn’t it be “your luck”?

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Yes. “You’re” is more of like saying someone is doing an action. Example “You’re running a mile”

There shouldn’t be an a before 7. (Just the two of us)


Should say “New hero” not plural…

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Well that is just you are luck. Makes no sense.

Demona’s Green Skill sounds weird

When Demona reaches 0 HP and after 6 seconds, Demona is healed for X HP and gains 250 energy. Demona also gains 250 energy at the start of each wave. The battle ends when Demona is KO’d when all of her allies are also KO’d.

I believe it should be

When Demona reaches 0 HP, she is healed for X HP and gains 250 energy after 6 seconds. Demona also gains 250 energy at the start of each wave. The battle ends when Demona is KO’d when all of her allies are also KO’d.

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The second one makes it sound like she heals straight away and gains 250 energy after 6 seconds. The way it’s worded now makes more sense.

But it sounds so off

I agree but if it was changed to your suggestion it may be misinterpreted.

Then how about

6 seconds after Demona reaches 0 HP, she is healed for X HP and gains 250 energy. Demona also gains 250 energy at the start of each wave. The battle ends when Demona is KO’d when all of her allies are also KO’d.

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Actually yes, that’s much nicer.

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Tenactiy

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Hmm

Am I missing something?

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Gotta make that main badge at the top my avatar somehow (forums)

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“A swing you won’t ‘tire’ of”

Should be

“A swing you won’t get ‘tired’ of”

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No, it is a pun because it is a tire-swing :wink:

I may be wrong but it still works this way?

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No, the present can be used like that.

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I think it is just a pun because it is a tire-swing…

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