Anything I should change?
No it’s perfect man
I have feedback
I would put the little lines between the skills like this one
you can make them putting 3 asterisks together like this: * * * but without the spaces, it looks cleaner
Here I would put a blockquote, you just have to select the text and click this button
This is how it looks
and this is how it looks when you add this three buttons
How muxh time?
What´s the percentage and how much time?
percentage
how much time?
percentage
percentage
This is the name of the campaign?
same
I don´t understand this, also what happens when you add other stars?
What happens when you add other stars?
and in both disks you are missing the disk power
This is really good for a first concept, good job!
(but you can´t change a lot of things after submitting for Imagineer contest, except the little lines and the blockquotes)
Hope this helps 
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Thanks for the feedback Rino, it is very appreciated. How is that?
Also your concepts rally really good, I love the one on Auto!
Now is much better but I still have some small notes
You should put Buff in the first one and disk power in the second one, just a little mistake
Same in the other friendship
The additional stat boost in red skills are always 3, also
this sounds more like a disk power on a friendship, Stat boost are like:
+X BD
+X SP
+X max HP
+X reality
+X armor
+X evasion
+X tenacity
+X heal to “skill name”
+X damage to “skill name”
That´s all, you´ll improve with time and become better concept maker, if you need more help you can check A Guide to Making Character Concepts, you also can create your own concept preview PM (is a PM where you post your concepts before posting them, soyo have feedback before it´s realized)
Thanks! 
Thank you, I’ll fix those.
I think that’s better 
How 'bout now?
When I said this
I meant this
Buff: Charmed enemies forfeit energy to Mabel’s allies.
Disk power: reality to allies when using Smile dip
I meant swapping buff and disk power
same in the other friendship.
That´s all.
can’t believe I made that mistake! Thank you for being patient with me!
Don´t worry, I´m always to help
Happy Birthday!!!
(Quoting Frosty the snowman, not insulting you by saying it’s your birthday.)
Pretty good first concept!
This needs a variable.
Also needs a variable.
Since this is for Imagineer’s contest, I guess you can edit your concept after.
? what variables?
I forgot that this is for Imagineer’s contest, I think that the concept will count as it was when you posted it, before I gave you feedback or idk
Reflect may fail if the ally is above level X
and same in the red skill but with blind, freeze, crit chance etc.
A variable, like you put in your other skills.
Here, you put X, which is the variable. You must have a variable for each skill. X, Y, or Z are mostly used.
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Yes, also, this is less necessary but it still helps
These could use capital letters to look more organized and detailed. I definitely agree with the other points made here though.
Thank you all for the comments, I think I answered every one!
Always happy to help 