Is it okay if I give some feedback? Also is this your first concept @Bonniecakes cause it is pretty good for a first one.
No, Celia was my first concept.
The concept is not done yet but other then that I’m enjoying it
Also is he a Muppets character?
They’re a Jim Henson character, so technically?
Ok. It is pretty good either way.
First to answer your question about a study heavy character I suggest looking at characters like Maximus, Hector Barbossa, Basil, etc. A lot of heroes on the Yellow Trial Team study, so I suggest looking there.
Now onto the feedback. This is a good concept, but it is too OP and pretty complicated.
The name of the character should be before the image so people know who this is.
This is not what a basic attack is. A Basic Attack is something like “(name of character) swings his/her sword at enemies.” It is what they do, not the damage they deal. In fact, where exactly are the animations? So the entrance, victory, and defeat animations (what they do when those things happen)
This is a good description, but in terms of organizing I feel it should be after the image and before the quote.
I am having trouble understanding this skill, so I really cannot give feedback on it. It is really complicated and OP.
Does this buff the enemies attack speed and SKILL power? It is just unclear who gets the buff. This is a good skill, but the dodge makes it OP, so I suggest removing that.
This skill is good.
Purple skills are passive and do not have new animations.
This is a pretty good red skill, but there is just a little to much going on in it. I suggest removing the thing about “Convincing Cognition” and then it would be fine.
And you are missing the friendships. I hope this feedback helps and does not discourage you. Keep making concepts and you will improve!
It said WIP for a reason.
Oh sorry I did not notice that. Also, I forgot what it meant 
I do hope it helps you improve it though.
Well, I changed it. Maybe even majorly in some parts.
Not trying to sound rude but
Purple skills can’t have new animations
King Louie, Maximus, Davy Jones and Judy Hopps have purple skills with new animations.
Those are revives and dodges, which are the only purple things that can have new animations
Maximus does not have a Dodge nor a revive
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Don’t revive concepts.
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It was listed as the top listed thread. Its not a month old so its not a necro. Its relevant to discussion. Dont be a pedant.
Its also a cool kit worth discussing.
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But concepts are only ‘alive’ for the first couple of days so you were reviving a dead thread.
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Kit concepts are alive as long as their Op is willing to discuss them yo. Thats the whole point of the thing. Its a community and discussion of something old thats an original idea isnt ever an issue.
Its not like I should just make my own thread on the topic. That would be even more egregious.
Its best to discuss things in the thread they were made for. And again this was a highly recent thread in the main forum listing for this section. Theres no reason to check dates if thats the case.
Anyway as I originally brought up Id love to see more Jim Henson content but the Dark Crystal is not owned by disney as a property.
Only Polaris is a moderator. So this claim has no value.
- It’s a concept doesn’t have to be Disney, there are tons of looney toons, office, gremlins, and dc concepts
- Don’t revive dead topics
He’s not the one spamming, your the one spamming about how you can revive any topic you want even if it is dead
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