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The “of” should be a “to”
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Also I assume ‘beus’ is supposed to say beaus?
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On Top It Said Stealing Armor. So
They Steal 10% Of Armor
They Forgot To Add Armor
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Under Mercenaries in the (i) information section, there is “merc a naries”
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I’ve no idea if someone has already brought it up, but I’m going to bring it up here.
The skill names of Goliath’s purple and red skills should be switched. Right now, the descriptions of those skills don’t actually match their names.
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I brought it up on the patch notes.
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Not a major one but this should say ‘not to’ rather than ‘to not’.
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True, though that could also be deliberately incorrect depending on how it’s said
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On all of the subway backgrounds where the newsstand is shown: “stationary” is shown as a newsstand product. Paper for letter and note writing is “stationery” spelled with an e as in “envelope.”
“Stationary” refers to something that does not move or stays in the space it is located in.
The wrong form of the word is used in that background.
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All in the same chapter…
There should be a comma after Enraged.
“But” at the beginning of a sentence like this is poor structure.
The comma should be a semicolon or something else to break up the sentence.
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I think this sounds okay when spoken, but I really tripped over myself the first seven times I read it, so I don’t know… Maybe it is just me 
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Well “more better” is a grammatical error I think
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That was what I was talking about, I could say it out loud and it sounds alright, I guess but it really bothers me typed out.
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Actually to not is proper grammar while not to is modern
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