Mal concept 2

[power_me_up]

Mal

“Rotten to the core “

Mal spreads mischief on the battle field using spells and potions

Basic move: Mal throws potions at enemies

Entering battle :Mal rides in on her motorcycle

Win pose : Mal creates fireworks and smiles

Defeat :the barrier surrounds Mal and she sulks and kicks the floor

White move : | soul of the dragon | Mal grabs the hades amber and becomes a dragon and burst blue flames and electricity dealing fantastic damage

Green move : | bust the move | Mal uses spells on her enemies choosing random heroes to be controlled and damaged slowly

Blue move : Wicked scheme | Mal pulls out a bottle of purple and red liquid throwing it down summoning smoke that stuns enemies and deals damage to the strongest opponent

Purple move : | the barrier | the first time Mal reaches 0 hp she drinks a potion putting her back to full health and summoning a Shield around her

Red move : | the VK’S | Carlos jay and Evie walk onto the battle field to cheer on Mal boosting her stats and moves

[LetsGetDangerousBro]

You know that you can edit your original post

And again, red skills don’t have a new animation…

[power_me_up]

Yeah but tbh I did that bc I did not wanna have to re type the same stuff bc I wanted to change it up

[Irrer-Minnie]

The Concept is very creative but it really has to be improved… Try reading Concepts of other Concept Makers. Here are a few links:
“Brotherly Love” - Kenai & Koda Likely Concept
Tiana Concept by @Irrer_Minnie_VIII
Disgust Hero Concept (Requested by @Irrer_Minnie_VIII)
Flora, Fauna, And Merryweather Hero Concept

[Irrer-Minnie]

There are other amazing Concept Makers too,these are just a few examples

[power_me_up]

Okay I see why you say that

[Irrer-Minnie]

I can also invite you to my Concept Previews PM. I post my Concepts there before I publish them and improve them with other Forumers

[Agent_mater]

Thats rapidfire concept it was not needed posting this concept you should had edit your original post instead

[Irrer-Minnie]

Thats rapidfire concept it was not needed posting

Your rude comments aren’t needed posting too.

[Agent_mater]

Thats not rude and when concept need editing you need to edit it not openeing a thread with the same concept

[Irrer-Minnie]

Yes, I know this. Maybe try to bit friendlier next time when giving feedback.

[Agent_mater]

Will try to being more friendlier

[Imagineer_V]

@power_me_up I recommend looking at this guide I made for concept making if you have not already.